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Postby Flamez » Mar 29th, '07, 02:57

just something i wrote :sweating:

number 24 Kobe Bryant thats his name known worldwide
many loving fans and many others hating from each side
a fearless competitor by the nickname of black mamba
viciously attacking on a scoring onslaught Ay! Caramba
Kobe's dancing the Brazilian samba making' clutch shots
on fire hot scoring points like money outta casino slots
has no weak spots he got what it takes to be on top
a winner at heart who's passion for the game don't stop
always got enemies locked once he pops up in the air you drop
violent stream of hot water coming Kobe attacking' his prey
walk away before this deadly snake come out to seize the day

feedback pleas :8)
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Postby Inches » Mar 29th, '07, 03:01

Smh, Kobe creeper?
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Just kidding man, pretty good better than I expected a rhyme about KB to be
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 29th, '07, 03:22

:unsure: *leaves thread*
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Postby D@vid » Mar 29th, '07, 04:00

ay caramba :laughing:


like inches said, it was better than what i thought.

but it was still kinda gay. writing a rap about a guy :shakehead:
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Postby $0 R3@L » Mar 29th, '07, 04:31

writing a rap = not gay

writing a rap about your fav basketball player = yes gay

but hey if you wanna slam dunk the punk in the bunk,not my buisness.
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Postby JMG » Mar 29th, '07, 04:50

^^^^ lmao
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Postby Flamez » Mar 29th, '07, 06:16

lmao smh at you ppl..in the first place i don't care if you think its gay really.. i know i'm not gay, im' damn straight :8)
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Postby Flamez » Mar 29th, '07, 06:24

Angie wrote:
,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote::unsure: *leaves thread*



rofl!!!!!!!!!!!!


*writes a fuck kobe rhyme* :shifty:


lol smh do it i don't care...there's many kobe haters anyway that will get there mouth shuts by kobe himself lol :sweating:
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Postby Flamez » Mar 29th, '07, 06:28

lol X_X i didn't mean he's actually gonna go to your house and shut you up are you insane lol
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Postby Flamez » Mar 29th, '07, 06:35

lol k
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Postby JMG » Mar 29th, '07, 06:40

whoever door kobes at be careful u dont wanan get raped
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 29th, '07, 12:18

Angie wrote:
KB24 wrote:
Angie wrote:
,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote::unsure: *leaves thread*



rofl!!!!!!!!!!!!


*writes a fuck kobe rhyme* :shifty:


lol smh do it i don't care...there's many kobe haters anyway that will get there mouth shuts by kobe himself lol :sweating:


*waits for kobe to show up at her door* we shall see


roflmao so true angie :worship:


yo flamez, if i wrote a ryhme about eminem id be a stalker so your a koybe groupie/stalker...thats fuck man
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Postby Flamez » Mar 29th, '07, 15:17

smh you ppl kobe is just my favorite player i've been a fan of him since 2000.. :sweating:
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Postby Kojack » Mar 29th, '07, 15:21

HEY KB24, when you gonna get married with Kobey Brian
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Postby $0 R3@L » Mar 29th, '07, 15:25

Kojack wrote:HEY KB24, when you gonna get married with Kobey Brian


yer you should do a double wedding with coco,kojack and 50.
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