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Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 4th, '07, 02:54

audio, who tha hell would Sing His Rap
yur flows dead, u can't Bring It Back
I'd get a ko, even if yur Voters Were Dead
drought, bitch please yur in Over Yur Head
falling in2 a volcano wouldn't Leave Him Hotter
Gurgle, turn Purple, thats right Breathe In Water
yeah I'm matrix, I Wrote Thru A Awesome Glitch
I see u sink good man, Float 2 Tha Bottom Bitch
yur like a "improv comic", They Pretend
say faker 1 more time yur carrer May End
u type like a "baby", u write with a Play Pen
and yur just like a "ATM", cuz u'll Pay Friend
I'm tha reason all of Shadys Men, know there is no more JM
All Yur Drops Falter, Cop Caller, u know tha whole Station
I'm tha Threat Trasher, Text Master, I'm in tha East With Steel
a Rebel Kid, that knows what Metal Is, yur not tha Least Bit Real
I'm Established At This, go home nad Practice, Key More New Tracks
I'll Fight A Court, put u on Life Support, so think Before U Act
Jmjeezy, way 2 Easy, really a battle, u'd need a Miracle, Yor Scared
I'm Respected, nothing 2 Mess With, u wern't even in Lyrical Warfare
thats right u heard me, now I suggest u Stop Yur Mouth
yur not "usda" this beef will go 2 tha Slaughter House

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Re: URGENT! Jmjeezy Passed On, At 9:55 Monday Night

Postby Global » Apr 4th, '07, 02:56

for some reason it starts off than it goes of track *shrigs*
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Re: URGENT! Jmjeezy Passed On, At 9:55 Monday Night

Postby stevethetruth » Apr 4th, '07, 03:06

Global wrote:for some reason it starts off than it goes of track *shrigs*

what he said


it was pretty good you doozed off a quarter way through but went back on topic


I'm tha Threat Trasher, Text Master, I'm in tha East With Steel
a Rebel Kid, that knows what Metal Is, yur not tha Least Bit Real
I'm Established At This, go home nad Practice, Key More New Tracks

^those lines werethe only worthy lines in my opinon, the rest was so-so

the usda line was good too though

you should really try audio and practice audios idk just my two cents

(and ....yes i'm bored, hence why i typed this much lol)
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Re: URGENT! Jmjeezy Passed On, At 9:55 Monday Night

Postby Hoopz » Apr 4th, '07, 03:44

steverocks88 wrote:
Global wrote:for some reason it starts off than it goes of track *shrigs*

what he said


it was pretty good you doozed off a quarter way through but went back on topic


I'm tha Threat Trasher, Text Master, I'm in tha East With Steel
a Rebel Kid, that knows what Metal Is, yur not tha Least Bit Real
I'm Established At This, go home nad Practice, Key More New Tracks

^those lines werethe only worthy lines in my opinon, the rest was so-so

the usda line was good too though

you should really try audio and practice audios idk just my two cents

(and ....yes i'm bored, hence why i typed this much lol)
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Postby JMG » Apr 4th, '07, 04:48

im tired tommrow ill call ur bluff but4 now im gonna sleep on this... shit its soft enough
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