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Friends With Benefits

Postby Rae » Apr 4th, '07, 19:50

Friend with benefits,
Was all you could say,
Friends with benefits,
Fuck that-you can take that offer away,

I just wanna be friends,
That
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I drink more than you, I party harder than you do, And my car is faster than yours too! RAWWRR!

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Postby Big-T » Apr 4th, '07, 23:44

seems like quite a sad and angry song n i like it a lot. the flow goes pretty well 2 me so i guess i dnt hav much 2 say other than keep it up :8)
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Postby JMG » Apr 4th, '07, 23:47

i liked it good rhymes and idea
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Postby Hoopz » Apr 4th, '07, 23:47

nice
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Postby Rae » Apr 4th, '07, 23:49

thanks :D

its to a 50 cent beat.
im thinkin about recordin it.
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Postby $0 R3@L » Apr 5th, '07, 00:28

hey im a friend with benefits :shifty: (only uk peeps may get this)

nice stuff hun,ur shit hot with the spit drop. :worship:
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Postby Rae » Apr 5th, '07, 00:32

thanks hunn :D

i have some friends with benefits ...

but ... not with this guy its a long story.
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Postby JMG » Apr 5th, '07, 00:42

what put of nc u live in im real close to there maybe we can start a friendship up
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Postby imarun10 » Apr 5th, '07, 00:47

i liked it cuz it really relates to how a lot of people are now. commitment kinda dying while the easy, quick relationships are growing.

im sure it would sound great to one of 50's beats. his are real tough
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Postby Rae » Apr 5th, '07, 01:15

thanks imarun10 ;)

and i live in Charlotte NC.
where do you live?
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Postby JMG » Apr 5th, '07, 01:19

why r u gettin all personal but i live all over the place im in michigan right now but im bout to be near ronaoke va and norfolk and shit and i used to live in durhum and selma nc
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Postby Global » Apr 5th, '07, 01:20

Hoopz wrote:nice
“Some people tell me that we professional players are soccer slaves. Well, if this is slavery, give me a life sentence.” - Bobby Charlton

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Postby Rae » Apr 5th, '07, 01:32

Jmgeezy wrote:why r u gettin all personal but i live all over the place im in michigan right now but im bout to be near ronaoke va and norfolk and shit and i used to live in durhum and selma nc


uh? how am i gettin personal ?
i dont recall askin if u had aim or msn personal? :confusion:

dont flatter yourself
... thinkin im tryin to get "personal" with you. :laughing:

crazy :8)


what put of nc u live in im real close to there maybe we can start a friendship up


^^ and i personally think that is WAY WAY WAY more "personal" than me askin if u had aim or msn...
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Postby JMG » Apr 5th, '07, 01:42

i was jp lol and yeah i do have msn hold up
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Postby Rae » Apr 5th, '07, 01:46

wow i feel dumb as hell.

iight :D


:flower: :flower: :flower:
sorrie i was in bitch mode :D
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