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Moribund aka Near Death (Kojack Diss)

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Moribund aka Near Death (Kojack Diss)

Postby Tash8 » Apr 4th, '07, 07:08

I'm soo quick-and-fast, you take time to suck-dick and you'll get passed
I'll have you harmed-and-spat-in, even when your armed-and-packin and then you'll see this white trash crappin'
and he'll go to his mom rattin' but if you didn't want it you shouldn't have been-askin'
plus you smell like shit with all that gas that you been-passin'
It's a fact i'm sweet-and-sonic and i'll make you bleed-and-vomit, I'm full of greed-and-its-chronic
I'll cut your spleen-cause-I'm-demonic, no one will grieve-cause-they-all-want it.
and you know I'm sick-and-violent, you suck dick-but-you-keep-silent
plus times-run-out-that's-all-thats-them, it's my time-to-shout-and-piss-at-him.

When kojacks squashes it, i might back out.
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Postby Hadez » Apr 4th, '07, 08:20

you bolded "suck dick".... wut was that sposed to rhyme with? and some of the sylibols in your multis are off.

and what's your problem wit kojack anyway?
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Postby Global » Apr 4th, '07, 09:52

Hadez wrote:and what's your problem wit kojack anyway?
“Some people tell me that we professional players are soccer slaves. Well, if this is slavery, give me a life sentence.” - Bobby Charlton

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Postby C-Game » Apr 4th, '07, 10:36

im not pointin out to emineman ..
in general i dont like this diss tracks goin on in da creative writin section...thats wat battles are for...

i dont wanna lock these...
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 4th, '07, 16:24

in all my battles, he goes to the opponent and tells them good luck and everytime he can he would vote for the other opponent (without reasoning) and he does this to bar and ice, not just me.
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Postby C-Game » Apr 4th, '07, 16:45

emineman wrote:in all my battles, he goes to the opponent and tells them good luck and everytime he can he would vote for the other opponent (without reasoning) and he does this to bar and ice, not just me.


oh i c....
if it sounds one sided ... ill delete his posts....

ill take care of it mate
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 4th, '07, 23:27

aite thanks
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Postby AspirinE » Apr 5th, '07, 09:19

Kojacks shit is better, rekognize.
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Postby Global » Apr 5th, '07, 09:19

AspirinE wrote:Kojacks shit is better, rekognize.
roflmao
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 5th, '07, 10:40

this is getting stupid now :unsure:
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Postby Hadez » Apr 5th, '07, 21:37

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:this is getting stupid now :unsure:


i agree... it seems like just about everyday eminem man is postin some shit to "diss" kojack.
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 5th, '07, 22:30

this was the first day and last day ^^ you fuckin dumbass.
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Postby Hadez » Apr 5th, '07, 22:43

emineman wrote:this was the first day and last day ^^ you fuckin dumbass.


dont start that shit... i dont understand why you're itchin for this internet beef thing. you think its givin you this tough guy image so you take everything as an attack. you need to calm the fuck down.
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 5th, '07, 22:54

^^ like i saaid in my ohter post, sorry man i just really stressed out at the moment.
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Postby Hadez » Apr 5th, '07, 22:57

emineman wrote:^^ like i saaid in my ohter post, sorry man i just really stressed out at the moment.


i understand, school's a bitch. homeschool is where its at.

anyway, good song. had some multis, thats a plus.
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