Payin My Dues

[Rain Matrix]

Depressed, I'll try 2 Smile This Breath
I Rest knowing tha only Exile Is Death
tha Journey Turns Me 2 Questions
tha Truths In tha Solutions Lessons
Hold On, Let Go, is it Real Or More Help
Old Wrongs Echo, u must Feel 4 Yorself
u don't have 2 run, Take This Plan Escape
don't stick around 2 see Hate Twist And Shape
what u create comes from a Golden Supply
discover while u can, tha enimies Molding A Lie
in this life, u can rise or fall, it's like Holding Tha Sky
Can A Nation Fall if Animations Stall, I Freely Say See These Days
Behind No Thanks, my Mind Goes Blank, there is no Easy Way

[Tash8]

i dont know why i felt this way, but the lines were too short and you basicly rhymed them all (which isn't always good)... it's not bad but not near you best.

[Hadez]

i dont know why i felt this way, but the lines were too short and you basicly rhymed them all (which isn't always good)... it's not bad but not near you best.

i thought the lines were fine. its better than the abnormally long lines everybody else here has. good stuff, i like it. propz

[Tash8]

i didn't mean that they need to be a lot longer but its just like i dont know when i read it out loud it didn't sound as good as his others.

[JMG]

belive it or not i liked it

[Rae]

its ok.

i agree def. not your best.