A Piece that I try to Master

[JMG]

as difficulties multiply still hopin for the trophyprize
spittin multies there rollin eyes but the globe we no has only open skys
theres truth inside phony spoken lies that are tied with broken trys
failed attempts fade cuz the efforts never die they lie forever inside
my soul and mind emoticans fly u can control the line but never the ocean tides
so im gonna ride the waves cuz i relized the stakes
and ill anialate any guy with hate that trys to take and deprive my fate
but all my ideas turns out to be broken lights
a burnin soul lies in the fire of hopless nights
the futures unclear so how am i suppose to focus right
but im determinded cuz if i dont got courage
i learned i will not flourish im worthless
and my rhymes can only improve and cultivate
loads of hate phony fakes thinkin they broke my fate

[JMG]

[Tash8]

me like one thing i can say is don't make every other word rhymes lol

[JMG]

no i will never stop

[Tash8]

never stop what??

[JMG]

rhymin

[Tash8]

good for you.