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Worplay makin the world pay

Postby 4D » Mar 28th, '06, 20:39

Wordplay makin da world pay, you`re bird prey when i verb slay
I spurn pray for burn spray or Nurse care when my word blaze? ,
Girls say you irk they, You`re a nerd gay and a birdbrain,
Surged rain of dispersed tears, immersed years in that hurt pain
Unrational abherrant fake tits on a bird make the sperm stay
But, natural firm sphere`d tits on a girl make the spirt spray
Dirt glazed world stays sick n shit no matter the words prayed,
Swerve way from religion, villainous worst craze since Earth`s birthday.
Worth pay but my words stay on websites like bedmites or germs bane.
Do it for the firm praise and the passion to bash in and burn brains
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Postby 4D » Mar 28th, '06, 20:47

Thanks a lot man!! :D
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Postby 4D » Mar 28th, '06, 20:53

Wow, now that`s a compliment!! :D Thanks again!
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Mar 28th, '06, 21:42

:shocked:

damn
i had to reread that about 4 times to understand it. i kept reading the rhyming words (which was basically all of it) as other words.
but wow
that was crazy
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Postby Da Hook » Mar 29th, '06, 01:36

It Was Straight



..::It Is What It Is::..
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Postby sicilyzbest » Mar 31st, '06, 14:03

thas what up
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Postby 4D » Mar 31st, '06, 15:03

Thanks for the comments everyone, i was gonna add a few more lines to this, don`t want to over play it though, whatcha think?
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Postby 4D » Mar 31st, '06, 23:33

Thanks, I will but with otheer rhyming words, like memyselforwho said, not tonight though!!
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Postby C-Game » Apr 11th, '07, 19:15

whoa fordie some sick wordplay

students read and learn :)
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Postby Flamez » Apr 11th, '07, 21:13

damn that was sick had to re-read it twice lol :sweating: :worship:
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Postby DJ.Parker » Apr 12th, '07, 06:38

:worship: continue it dont stop from there.....awesome :smoking:
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Postby Epidemik » Apr 15th, '07, 23:11

thought this part was sick

Dirt glazed world stays sick n shit no matter the words prayed,
Swerve way from religion, villainous worst craze since Earth`s birthday.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 15th, '07, 23:12

you could become a very rich man if you ghostwrote :D


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Postby Inches » Apr 15th, '07, 23:25

ThomasAguanis wrote::shocked:

damn
i had to reread that about 4 times to understand it. i kept reading the rhyming words (which was basically all of it) as other words.
but wow
that was crazy
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What he said.
Big propz man that was sick
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Postby 4D » Apr 17th, '07, 13:30

Thanks a lot people, wrote this a while ago, props to C-Game for bumpin it.

I have to get back writing more shit. :happy:
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