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Postby B.A.D. » Apr 14th, '07, 05:28

I eat cake
in the lake
I like school
because its cool



feed please
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Postby stevethetruth » Apr 14th, '07, 05:29

:laughing:


that was wack
lol
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Postby D@vid » Apr 14th, '07, 05:30

:worship:

u r god
Life is just one big lesson
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 14th, '07, 05:30

D@vid wrote::worship:

u r god


yup

rakim aint got shit on you
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 14th, '07, 05:31

it'd be amazing if you used a MULTI, but it's sttill good..

Great Flow, Great Structure, Great Rhymes, Bad Multis, Great Enjoyment.

Almost all cats passed, just work on multies,


;) ;) ;) ;)
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Postby Hadez » Apr 14th, '07, 05:32

Tash8 wrote:it'd be amazing if you used a MULTI, but it's sttill good..

Great Flow, Great Structure, Great Rhymes, Bad Multis, Great Enjoyment.

Almost all cats passed, just work on multies,


;) ;) ;) ;)

i wouldnt talk Tash.... its betta than all your shit.



jp :flower:
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 14th, '07, 05:36

well no shit itt's better than my shit... look at my post, it showed how he killed on each cat.

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Postby JMG » Apr 14th, '07, 05:37

its good fuck school though
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Postby C-Game » Apr 14th, '07, 05:42

damn impressive
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 14th, '07, 05:42

yea beats anything 2pac, eminem, jay-z, biggie did, but of course no where near c-game ;)
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Postby Hadez » Apr 14th, '07, 05:45

Tash8 wrote:yea beats anything 2pac, eminem, jay-z, biggie did, but of course no where near c-game ;)

C-Game didnt i tell you that you had a groupie?
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 14th, '07, 05:53

he knows i'm his groupie, i said that in the other post ;)
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Postby Hadez » Apr 14th, '07, 05:54

Tash8 wrote:he knows i'm his groupie, i said that in the other post ;)

homo? :unsure:
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 14th, '07, 05:58

lol you know we just playing :worship:
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Postby JMG » Apr 14th, '07, 06:05

:unsure:
JMG wrote: so are you gonna come fight me or not

Menzo wrote:No, I HAVE something to live for.
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