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mi primer latin rap

Postby Flamez » Apr 14th, '07, 18:10

this is my first time writing something in spanish :sweating: i know most of you won't understand lol but just wanted to post it here..

un mexicano latino nacido en california en los estados unidos
bienvenidos a mi mundo latino vamos todos pa no'star aburridos
todo la raza latina de pie vamos todos los hispanos pa'ribba
las hermosas latinas muevan lo de atras se miran bien atractivas
que creativas pa'enfrente pa'tras que explosivas bailando sexy
a una le dicen la riena de california por que es una hermosura la smexi
ahora todos con la manos pa'ribba vamos a bailar al ritmo sabor latino
agarren su pareja y vamonos tomandonos una copa llena de vino
esto no mas lo escribo es el destino pero vamos a buen camino

feedback appreciated.. :sweating:
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 14th, '07, 18:15

well I'm not a spanish expert yet, so i only understood like 3/4th of what you said

but it rhymes pretty well, i think...

and not bad.
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Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Apr 14th, '07, 18:17

umm i guess its pretty good...ryhmes well
and structure is good too...i guess :unsure:
good job...i guess :whistle: :flower: lol

and i didnt understood it :sweating:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 14th, '07, 18:26

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Postby Tash8 » Apr 14th, '07, 18:31

^ cuz he read it in english i'm guessing


Spanish always ends in a, e, i and shit like that so it' snot hard to rhyme..

this is one i made for my spanish skit and my teacher got pissed.

Yo, Yo, mi llamo snopp doggey
por que
porque Yo jueqe
con tu madre...


it means,
yo yo my name is snopp doggey.
why? because i played
with your mother.
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Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Apr 14th, '07, 18:40

yea i know the spanish accent.....and the words kinda ryhmed at the end so
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Postby Kojack » Apr 14th, '07, 20:02

benvenuto al nostro sito web
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Postby C-Game » Apr 14th, '07, 20:13

well dats da worst rap i have ever read

* or tried to read :shifty: :shifty:

lol...j/k dude

*walks away coz he cant understand spanish :'( :'(
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Postby Flamez » Apr 15th, '07, 01:39

lol well thanx for the feed :sweating:

and i know most of you people don't understand spanish :sweating:
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Postby JMG » Apr 15th, '07, 01:56

why dont u translate it
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Postby howie1360 » Apr 15th, '07, 03:14

i doubt it will be any good translated. it wont rhyme in english
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Postby JMG » Apr 15th, '07, 03:34

shutup
JMG wrote: so are you gonna come fight me or not

Menzo wrote:No, I HAVE something to live for.
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 15th, '07, 03:42

why should he shut up, he's right.

I guess he just owned you jmgeezy
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Postby JMG » Apr 15th, '07, 03:50

go jack off to eminem pics faggot
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 15th, '07, 04:04

good comeback bitch
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