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Lyrics With Killer Instinct[UPDATED]

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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 14th, '07, 21:31

Killa wrote:lol i just "a.k.a.d my rap name to K.I. (Killa Instinct) ....badly timed i guess :sweating:

nice work tho bro, stay up.


*cums* aint that a old snes game :whistle:


and btw tash on structure

structure of the ryhmes in a audio is to keep the same ryhme to the end of each bar :sweating: its not veyr important and alot of rappers dont ( like me i do my own way to flow the ryhmes ) but that may be what steve means coz structure in audio aint really a big problem :sweating:
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 15th, '07, 18:12

^^ thanks i'm trying to keep flow but i'm sttill altering the lyrics so it can flow better.

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Postby JMG » Apr 15th, '07, 19:33

i rate it 4/10 sorry
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 15th, '07, 19:53

^ okay good for you.. you can either explain your rating or stfu.
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Postby JMG » Apr 15th, '07, 20:11

its boring
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