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Postby Hoopz » Apr 23rd, '07, 05:12

Im not big on chain's but this one struck a nerve. After the whole Vtech thing..and at the bottom, the posters boyfriend was a victim in VT.




BUT IF YOU FIND YOU CANNOT STOP UNTIL YOU REACH THE END THEN YOU MUST HAVE A
VERY BIG
HEART...

Mommy.. Johnny brought a gun to school,

He told his friends that it was cool,

And when he pulled the trigger back,

It shot with a great crack.

Mommy, I was a good girl, I did What I was told,

I went to school, I got straight A's, I even got the gold!

But Mommy, when I went to school that day,

I never said good-bye,

I'm sorry Mommy, I had to go, But Mommy, please don't cry.

When Johnny shot the gun, He hit me and another,

And all because Johnny, Got the gun from his older brother.

Mommy, please tell Daddy; That I love him very much,

And please tell Zack; my boyfriend; That it wasn't just a crush.

And tell my little sister; That she is the only one now,

And tell my dear sweet grandmother; I'll be waiting for her now,

And tell my wonderful friends; That they always were the best;

Mommy, I'm not the first, I'm no better than the rest.

Mommy, tell my teachers; I won't show up for class,

And never to forget this, And please don't let this pass.

Mommy, why'd it have to be me? No one deserves this,

Mommy, warn the others, Mommy I left without a kiss.

And Mommy tell the doctors; I know they really did try,

I think I even saw a doctor, Trying not to cry.

Mommy, I'm slowly dying, With a bullet in my chest,

But Mommy please remember, I'm in heaven with the rest.

Mommy I ran as fast as I could,

When I heard that crack, Mommy, listen to me if you would,

I wanted to go to college, I wanted to try things that were new,

I guess I'm not going with Daddy, On that trip to the new zoo.

I wanted to get married, I wanted to have a kid,

I wanted to be an actress, Mommy, I wanted to live.

But Mommy I must go now, The time is getting late,

Mommy, tell my Zack, I'm sorry but I had to cancel the date.

I love you Mommy, I always have, I know; you know it's true,

And Mommy all I say is, "Mommy, I love you."

****In Memory of The Columbine Students Who Were Lost****
****And dont forget the People in the Virginia Tech Massacare****

Please if you would,
Don't smash this on the ground.

If you pass this on,

Maybe people will cry,

Just keep this in your heart,

For the people who didn't get to say "Good-bye".

Now you have 2 choices,

1) Pass this on, and show people you care, repost as "Try Not To Cry"
2) Don't send it, and you have just proven how cold-hearted you really are

i miss you kevin babii ( VT)
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Postby Hadez » Apr 23rd, '07, 05:14

i must not have a very big heart cuz i just skipped to the end.
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Postby Hoopz » Apr 23rd, '07, 05:17

Hadez wrote:i must not have a very big heart cuz i just skipped to the end.


then y post?
this aint just some bullshit "if u dont post u get badluck" type thing. this shit really happens.
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Postby $0 R3@L » Apr 26th, '07, 03:26

well i must be a cold hearted son-a-bitch because i didnt even read two lines...these chain letters aint worth the pixels there wrote with.
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Postby Hoopz » Apr 26th, '07, 23:31

$0 R3@L wrote:well i must be a cold hearted son-a-bitch because i didnt even read two lines...these chain letters aint worth the pixels there wrote with.


once again, then why bother posting.
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 26th, '07, 23:59

they did this with drunk driving, they did this with drug use.. I gotta say it was sad at first now it's just overused..

you know shit happens... This letter does nothing but make people depress. What is this letter trying to say, to tell people not to kill, well it ain't doing that, it just makes people depressed.
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Postby Hoopz » Apr 28th, '07, 04:57

Tash8 wrote:they did this with drunk driving, they did this with drug use.. I gotta say it was sad at first now it's just overused..

you know shit happens... This letter does nothing but make people depress. What is this letter trying to say, to tell people not to kill, well it ain't doing that, it just makes people depressed.


its a way to show these little fuckers who sit behind computers all day and know nothing about reality what is actually going on in the world.
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 28th, '07, 04:59

i guess so, but which idiot doesn't know about what happened at vtech?
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 28th, '07, 05:01

Hoopz wrote:
Tash8 wrote:they did this with drunk driving, they did this with drug use.. I gotta say it was sad at first now it's just overused..

you know shit happens... This letter does nothing but make people depress. What is this letter trying to say, to tell people not to kill, well it ain't doing that, it just makes people depressed.


its a way to show these little fuckers who sit behind computers all day and know nothing about reality what is actually going on in the world.


a chain letter to tackle that situation.... :unsure:



and like so real i got bored after like 5 lines :sweating:
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Postby D@vid » Apr 28th, '07, 05:47

death used to be no big deal to me cuz i never went through it, except for when i was real little and didn't fully understand what was goin on. then my great grandma passed away last november. it was one of the hardest times in my life. death freaks me out now, so i never joke about it. i can understand not caring cuz u dont know the ppl that died, but its still stupid to not care at all that a bunch of innocent lives were taken cuz some asshole with mental problems decided to go crazy rather than get help. u never really do know, until it happens to u and its too late
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 28th, '07, 06:00

D@vid wrote:death used to be no big deal to me cuz i never went through it, except for when i was real little and didn't fully understand what was goin on. then my great grandma passed away last november. it was one of the hardest times in my life. death freaks me out now, so i never joke about it. i can understand not caring cuz u dont know the ppl that died, but its still stupid to not care at all that a bunch of innocent lives were taken cuz some asshole with mental problems decided to go crazy rather than get help. u never really do know, until it happens to u and its too late


it has not happened to someone really close to me, but i can imagine the feeling, but what the fuck is the point of making other people depressed thru this letter?
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Postby D@vid » Apr 28th, '07, 06:10

Tash8 wrote:
D@vid wrote:death used to be no big deal to me cuz i never went through it, except for when i was real little and didn't fully understand what was goin on. then my great grandma passed away last november. it was one of the hardest times in my life. death freaks me out now, so i never joke about it. i can understand not caring cuz u dont know the ppl that died, but its still stupid to not care at all that a bunch of innocent lives were taken cuz some asshole with mental problems decided to go crazy rather than get help. u never really do know, until it happens to u and its too late


it has not happened to someone really close to me, but i can imagine the feeling, but what the fuck is the point of making other people depressed thru this letter?



u don't have to read it though
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 28th, '07, 06:12

i know, but other people do and get depressed, I'm not saying I did cause it didn't affect me.
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 28th, '07, 06:17

i did read it, i saw its point. I just don't like it.
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Postby Kez » Apr 28th, '07, 12:42

We are not "cold-hearted" because we ignore chain mail.

They are the cold ones, using this VT disaster as a new manipulation technique to fool people into paying any attention to these things.

Sending this thing around the internet won't do fuck all positive.
There's a word for shit like this; emotional blackmail.
Just ignore it, like you do with all chain-mail.
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