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by **JMG** » Apr 26th, '07, 20:33

i think it would be a good audio and i dont think tash knows what rap is .. who says u cant rhyme every other word.. cuz have u lisin to rock bottom or stimulate or most of eminems song u need to check that before u say stupid shit.. no offence but its the truth

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Apr 26th, '07, 21:00

Jmgeezy wrote:i think it would be a good audio and i dont think tash knows what rap is .. who says u cant rhyme every other word.. cuz have u lisin to rock bottom or stimulate or most of eminems song u need to check that before u say stupid shit.. no offence but its the truth

thx, lol we all learning the inner workings of rap so let him go lol

by **lil_bayly** » Apr 28th, '07, 17:37

TheWeirdoIsBack wrote:Nice stuff man, keep workin' in this fashion and the song'll turn out sick. I don't see or hear a lot of 'ations' bein' used in songs so its cool usin' words that are kinda hard to ryhme.

Hard to rhyme? where is this dude from? check this out:

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by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Apr 28th, '07, 18:04

^ yeh thats obviously off some rythming website...witch is cheating man aint goni get no respect form that

by **C-Game** » Apr 28th, '07, 18:46

good stuff mate

da only thing i cld say is its AN ADMIRATION...

not a admiration

good work man

by **lil_bayly** » Apr 29th, '07, 10:49

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:^ yeh thats obviously off some rythming website...witch is cheating man aint goni get no respect form that

Im just stating the fact that "ation" is prolly one of the easiest words to rhyme with. So really it takes no skill at all to make a 100 verses using "ation" words, Shit I could do it all day!!! :wave:

by **$0 R3@L** » Apr 29th, '07, 11:08

lil_bayly wrote:
,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:^ yeh thats obviously off some rythming website...witch is cheating man aint goni get no respect form that

Im just stating the fact that "ation" is prolly one of the easiest words to rhyme with. So really it takes no skill at all to make a 100 verses using "ation" words, Shit I could do it all day!!!

i agree to some extent.Sometimes it aint got nothing to do with multi's or how many rhymes you can cram into one verse,its about complex similes and/or metaphors.Anyone CAN grab a dictionary or use a rhyming site but its about using them words to tell a complex story,thats the real skill.

by **lil_bayly** » Apr 29th, '07, 13:32

$0 R3@L wrote:
lil_bayly wrote:
,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:^ yeh thats obviously off some rythming website...witch is cheating man aint goni get no respect form that

Im just stating the fact that "ation" is prolly one of the easiest words to rhyme with. So really it takes no skill at all to make a 100 verses using "ation" words, Shit I could do it all day!!!

i agree to some extent.Sometimes it aint got nothing to do with multi's or how many rhymes you can cram into one verse,its about complex similes and/or metaphors.Anyone CAN grab a dictionary or use a rhyming site but its about using them words to tell a complex story,thats the real skill.

Dude, what the fuck is with all the "science" shit about writing rhymes? Fuck complex similes and metaphors, a rhyme is a rhyme, its half beat and half lyrics, don't make this shit about some specific type of English exam!! Plus he said it took him a while to write. How long could it have taken really? Anyways, fuck the English/Science lecture for real. Multi's and shit!! No one in hear is a real entertainer... no one!! And all of you that think u "kno" what writing a rhyme is all about, Y aint u hit it big yet? Thats what I thought!! :whistle:

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Apr 29th, '07, 13:55

lil_bayly wrote:
$0 R3@L wrote:
lil_bayly wrote:
,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:^ yeh thats obviously off some rythming website...witch is cheating man aint goni get no respect form that

Im just stating the fact that "ation" is prolly one of the easiest words to rhyme with. So really it takes no skill at all to make a 100 verses using "ation" words, Shit I could do it all day!!!

i agree to some extent.Sometimes it aint got nothing to do with multi's or how many rhymes you can cram into one verse,its about complex similes and/or metaphors.Anyone CAN grab a dictionary or use a rhyming site but its about using them words to tell a complex story,thats the real skill.

Dude, what the fuck is with all the "science" shit about writing rhymes? Fuck complex similes and metaphors, a rhyme is a rhyme, its half beat and half lyrics, don't make this shit about some specific type of English exam!! Plus he said it took him a while to write. How long could it have taken really? Anyways, fuck the English/Science lecture for real. Multi's and shit!! No one in hear is a real entertainer... no one!! And all of you that think u "kno" what writing a rhyme is all about, Y aint u hit it big yet? Thats what I thought!!

^ your obviously thick

and @ real, its practice ryhme practice not worldplay mtaphor practice :whistle:

and i dont use websites to write my ryhmes so thats why it took a long time to write

by **Enimee** » Apr 29th, '07, 14:10

not you best bar

by **Enimee** » Apr 29th, '07, 14:14

lil_bayly wrote:
TheWeirdoIsBack wrote:Nice stuff man, keep workin' in this fashion and the song'll turn out sick. I don't see or hear a lot of 'ations' bein' used in songs so its cool usin' words that are kinda hard to ryhme.

Hard to rhyme? where is this dude from? check this out:

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Agitation
Allegation
Animation
Anticipation
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Assassination
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Authentication
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Automation
Aviation
Celebration
Cessation
Circulation
Civilization Civilizaci

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