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Postby James R. » Apr 29th, '07, 19:31

I pretty much freestyled this and then posted it lol. Flows a little off I think but yeah, basically just talkin some shit.

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Postby stevethetruth » Apr 29th, '07, 19:32

:worship: :worship: :worship: nice i liked that any luck it'll be audioed?
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Postby Big-T » Apr 29th, '07, 20:01

i liked it a lot dunno what else 2 say but i really did lol keep it up i guess
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Postby Hadez » Apr 29th, '07, 20:13

Big-T wrote:i liked it a lot dunno what else 2 say but i really did lol keep it up i guess

wut he said

propz :worship:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 29th, '07, 20:15

great work man :worship:

you do audio ?
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Postby James R. » Apr 29th, '07, 20:32

Thanks for the replies. And no I dont do audio but I'd like to get into it. Got a new lappy and I have Cool Edit, but I dont have a mic... Come to think of it I've only tried to use Cool Edit like once.
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Postby joelle » Apr 29th, '07, 20:33

you're amazing Jam
with your rhymes and my looks, we can take over the world.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 29th, '07, 20:37

James R. wrote:Thanks for the replies. And no I dont do audio but I'd like to get into it. Got a new lappy and I have Cool Edit, but I dont have a mic... Come to think of it I've only tried to use Cool Edit like once.



im sure couple of the guys here would help you out with mixing, there's also a mixing tutorial in "audio battles" section witch will help you with cool edit
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Postby James R. » Apr 29th, '07, 20:45

Aight thanks. I'll check it out, maybe make some friends and get some help.
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Postby Kez » Apr 29th, '07, 21:27

That was hot for a freestyle.

If you do audio you'll definately be in some of the high ranks here
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Postby Inches » Apr 29th, '07, 22:57

Big-T wrote:i liked it a lot dunno what else 2 say but i really did lol keep it up i guess
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Postby Flamez » Apr 30th, '07, 00:09

nice work :worship: liked it a lot man..
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Postby joelle » Apr 30th, '07, 00:47

6 worshipping smileys in one thread?
Daaaayyyyyuum. :worship:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 30th, '07, 00:48

joelle wrote:6 worshipping smileys in one thread?
Daaaayyyyyuum. :worship:


want me to make your day ?


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Postby joelle » Apr 30th, '07, 00:51

you're obnoxious :tounge2:
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