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wtf am i doing here at this hour?

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wtf am i doing here at this hour?

Postby Ka0t1c » May 2nd, '07, 22:32

i refuse to be the one who you'll see confused
and become out the scene like im done and sing the blues
cuz im gonna bring it on in the ring and duel
so do you think you're strong, how come, you'll sink you fool
i am not wrong when i speak the truth
i can see you're lost in the string thats spooled
whats the cause you seem unruled
have you forgot your dreams, you're thru
cuz ya last chance is gone, just leave, its due
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Postby Hadez » May 2nd, '07, 22:34

i like it, propz, keep it up :flower:
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Postby James R. » May 2nd, '07, 22:36

I'm assuming that was a keystyle since it was so short and that wasn't bad for a key. Had some decent vocab to be off the top. There were like 2 lines that were just like "uhh...ok?" but I mean it seems like your just talkin some shit. It's a good exercise. Gets the mental juices flowin and a lot of times it gives you some good shit to recycle into battles and songs and whatnot.
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Postby Ka0t1c » May 2nd, '07, 22:44

yeah, thats exactly what is is, thanx for the positive feed, i wasnt expecting one at all
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