Me and You (Ladies, check it out)

[James R.]

Figured I'd try a song for the ladies and threw this together in about 30mins. Tell me what you think. It's a 1st draft, but I doubt I'll be motivated enough to make major changes lol

Yo hold up how you doin where you stay at?
Don

[stevethetruth]

nice shit man
good flow good lyrics, i got nothing to add to it

sounds like it was wriiten to that luda song pimping around the world, was it?

[Hadez]

nice
really dope, propz
i thought u said it was hard for you to write about girls ?

[Ka0t1c]

thats pretty good, i like the length of it a lot, especially how u made the chorus, i need to improve on those parts the most

[4D]

Whoa, I don't actually believe you wrote that in thirty minutes, and I don't really care mate. Cos that is really QUALITY, the verses have a nice easy flow to the lyrics with some great multies thrown in for good measure. The hook/chorus is also very very good. You'd make a good songwriter, I really hope i`m not glorifying a plageurist, cos we got burned on here a few times by people robbing others lyrics. Props if this is yours man, and keep posting I`m impressed with your stuff.

One line does kind of confuse me, it seems a little gay.

Cuz I wanna please you before I go for mine
Then I

[James R.]

@ Steve... I actually wrote it after I heard Get No Better by Cassidy, but I can see the Pimpin All Over the World in it.

@ Hadez... I didnt think I could lol but I just though of what I would say to a brazilian walkin down the street... mmmmmmmmmm brazilians

@ Kaotic... Thanks man, that's the 1st good hook I've ever written lol

Thanks for the feed people

[4D]

Just bumping this since you and I were writing at the same time, and don't think you seen my post

[JMG]

tight as hell

and im also waitin on a respone to fordies comment

[James R.]

Cuz I wanna please you before I go for mine
Then I

[4D]

Cuz I wanna please you before I go for mine
Then I

[James R.]

Hahaha thanks man I appreciate the feed a lot and I like that you asked for clarity, nothing makes me happier than explaining my writing.

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nice work man would make a good track

your ryhmings good and you got meaning in your lyrics, concept of it isnt nothign special but like nas sayed "its not what you do but how you did it" or something like that lol

good work man keep it up

n get on audio

[Hadez]

@ Hadez... I didnt think I could lol but I just though of what I would say to a brazilian walkin down the street... mmmmmmmmmm brazilians

[James R.]

Thanks, good to see what a lady has to say about it