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tryin somethin new

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tryin somethin new

Postby JMG » May 3rd, '07, 05:21

just tryin somethin new i did this after hearin too much by the game it was keyed mostly revised it just a lil



every bitch that we pass by where catchin there eye
the louder the bumps the faster we drive
hit the blunt and pass it to the guy
up in the passenger side
the trunks pratically alive
feels like were literally passin the time
im sittin back just rappin these lines
thinkin the back of mind i must have magic rhymes
cuz its like im pullin rabbits out of this master mind
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Postby Hadez » May 3rd, '07, 11:42

pretty good, propz.
but the flow was a little off due to mismatched syllibols.
keep it up tho, good job :flower:
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Postby James R. » May 4th, '07, 01:22

Flow was off, the multi thing was weird, it kinda worked and it had an audio feel to it, but at the same time it felt a little off. Not bad though, especially for a song inspired keystyle. Keep workin with it, might be an ill style to switch to.
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