My Emotions. My Life Today.

[Inches]

[color=red]I apologizee for the structure, i copy and pasted from an msn convo. Its very simplee nothing complex. But it captures what im feelin latley. Please feed.

I cant define/ My current stats and presence in time/ So how come I never can find/ The proper button to make it rewind/ I blame it on Stein/ He took something and I thought it was mine/ So as im writing these lines/ I wanna cock back, sit and recline/ Have my brains blasted by the shot of a nine/ And I know that these lines/ Are of an depression design/ But I tried to be kind/ And now im just losing my mind/ Matt Roan flows with the ink/ His death and this letter is linked/ Cause as you can see im having thought of going extinct/ And to make matters worse/ Theres other guys although I was first/ Sometimes I cant help but just blurt/ The true reasons why my heart really hurts/ Casue im treated like garbage that

[IceAxe]

that was good. the lack of complexity didnt matter, still a good read. Def. a lot of meaning in it. the "blast of a nine" line was a bit creepy.

Good stuff, keep it up

[Inches]

^ Thanks man, appreciate it.
Btw, Stein is the last name of a 'friend' who turned into a dick and did some bad shit.

[Tash8]

I cant define
My current stats and presence in time
So how come I never can find
The proper button to make it rewind
I blame it on Stein
He took something and I thought it was mine
So as im writing these lines
I wanna cock back, sit and recline
Have my brains blasted by the shot of a nine
And I know that these lines
Are of an depression design
But I tried to be kind
And now im just losing my mind
Matt Roan flows with the ink
His death and this letter is linked
Cause as you can see im having thought of going extinct
And to make matters worse
Theres other guys although I was first
Sometimes I cant help but just blurt
The true reasons why my heart really hurts
Casue im treated like garbage that

[shady_soul]

^^^yeah like tash said its simple yet so deep/ n' yeah thanks for amendment....if it wasnt for that, i woulda' never read it lol . good work . keep it up /

[Ka0t1c]

thats good work

[Inches]

Thx all, And thanks for makin it easier to read tash

[Tash8]

yea, no problem I read the first 2 lines of your spit and i decided it was worth the time. lol