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Take me Higher fet Mr.Feeny and Topanga

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Take me Higher fet Mr.Feeny and Topanga

Postby Cory Matthews » May 7th, '07, 06:25

Take me Higher fet Mr.Feeny and Topanga Lawance

verse 1


why are blocks ruined with rocks and prostitution
droppin troops an constent shootin
bads times are comin a dime a doszen
tryin to be a fine husband but my mind is rushin
mr feeny sorry for neglecting ur wisdom
upliftin and stickin i resepected ur system
u never gave up on cory u were there before the
court fee's it destroys me that u seen me sippin 40's
livin to snort keys gribbin the cal cuz u no there plottin
but this is buiness my pal so im sorry but i aint stopin
i gotta make the bread and butter
the fenes need to be fed in this gutter
i cant stand it the plantet is drugs damaged
i hope theres a place saved for me in thug mansion
and mr feeny u will always be the best educater
go ahead and spit a flow through ur resperater

hook- topanga

take me higher

let me breath

take me higher

as i spread my wings

tills its over

take me higher

above ur shouders


x 2
mr feeny

everyday i try to educate and preparate em
life is more then a reputation i get a warm sensation
when i pass out the test and they take em
but some times we try but there hesitant to lisin
pourin liquor for those nigga'z dead or in prison
in my bed reminiscing an wishin for recognition
wantin remission for all the test that ive givin
they thought it was prision im caught an a mission
to be proud i taught them division i'm lost in a prison
but i have to just do it without this class full of students
i would be bashful and useless a ruthless
and weak stressin man so get ur pencils and test in hand
but theres only so much u can teach in a lesson plan

hook x 4
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Postby Rain Matrix » May 7th, '07, 17:04

Is this what u want me write as lyrics, u want me 2 dumb down my "elevated" stuff 4 yur fantasy non existant pop chart

TR MC'S PLEASE!
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Postby Ka0t1c » May 7th, '07, 17:36

i think u both need some counseling
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Postby IceAxe » May 7th, '07, 20:36

ummm.... im not sure what to say. it sounded, to me, way too much like 2pac

and teachers rapping = bad idea
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Postby Cory Matthews » May 7th, '07, 20:38

you can't knock my hustle
it stinks how time flys in the blink of an eye,
bleedin inside breathing but why,sceamin to fly proceedin to die,
the towns got the best of me, every cop around has aressted me,
my dreams vanished just like that, now im feedin feanes just a man in black
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Postby James R. » May 7th, '07, 22:12

hahahahahaha Mr. Feeny and Topanga? You're really serious?

It sounds a lot like smtn Pac would spit and the flow was kinda weak. The vocab was decent, the concepts were weird as hell cuz you randomly referred back to Boy Meets World. It was average though
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