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I don't like to fight back

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I don't like to fight back

Postby xariuss » Nov 2nd, '05, 11:44

I don't like to fight back
i would rather grab a knife and raid the bike racks
it's not that im scared, it's just no ones got my back
i'm a phycho, it's known that i might crack
an athiest, who's got his sights at
the insituation of retard's who all wear white hats
i belong there but i'm not like that
i'm not going to kiss your ass so back off you white cat's
fuck crack im off that
i started to cough black , vomit and grey plaque
so as is said, i'm about to go now
bout to throw out my own ass out this flow now..


what ya think, just wrote it then, just wanted to creative some crazy shit, shows my messed up mind at the moment.. im all confused, death in the family etc... doesnt make sense but i like it..

ur opinion matters more though, so hollar
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Postby Inzanity » Nov 2nd, '05, 13:28

I liked it. It was pretty good.
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Postby Cartman » Nov 2nd, '05, 19:16

No what thats like dawg - can relate to what youre feelin - pretty good shit - try writing a few more bars..this could be something good! :smoking:
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