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Postby James R. » May 17th, '07, 23:09

3hrs 2 days ago and this is what you get? God damn I love myself.

(Take Over Instrumental)

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Postby joelle » May 17th, '07, 23:10

gooo James :D :D :D

To everyone who think he bit...fuck all of you. I will personally vouch for this kid and say that he has never and will never bite. He has no reason to..he has more talent in his finger than most have in their whole bodies. I've read things he's written for over a year now and know his style, know what he's capable of, know what rapping means to him..why would he start biting now, in a random insignificant battle, stealing a line that's not even shockingly clever (meaning, it's not that hard to think up)? You're googling his lyrics and trying to find any loopholes in his rhymes because he's so good that you're convinced he must be cheating..which is complimenting him, in a way, but seroiusly? Get over it. He's talented, probably more talented than everyone on this site. That's all there is to it.
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Postby IceAxe » May 17th, '07, 23:20

I'm lovin it.... keep this shit up

joelle wrote:You're googling his lyrics and trying to find any loopholes in his rhymes because he's so good that you're convinced he must be cheating


they check eveyones lyrics
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Postby Tash8 » May 17th, '07, 23:35

nice shit man, keep it up..

you regained your respect from me haha :D
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Postby sixersi349 » May 17th, '07, 23:56

yup nice, keep it up
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Postby dookie » May 18th, '07, 00:10

ur better than i last saw, ur flow is great

but WHY GOD WHY do u have to use the cliche rap lines and self respectin bullshit
if u stopped being so melodramatic and cliched (i know im not good either but ohwell) and dont use lines like "the greatest" and talk about respect and all that crap u might end up being good,

become a poet not a rapper, rap is played

anyways its all good, u just need to change what u wana say
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Postby joelle » May 18th, '07, 00:20

^I thought you went to bed.
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Postby James R. » May 18th, '07, 00:21

The last verse more or less explains that there was a confrontation and speculation that I didn't write something I posted and should show why I took the approach that I did. It was a song more for punchlines. You don't do 100 bar songs. My songs are like poetry in motion when you read it. And yeah flow is what I do. Thanks
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Postby joelle » May 18th, '07, 00:36

McMaybe wrote:I know, im talking to some people i know... working on getting him a record deal, or some free studio time..


I know. :)
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Postby James R. » May 18th, '07, 17:43

Read it bitches, you know you wanna
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Postby Kez » May 18th, '07, 21:29

:worship: :worship: :worship:

One of the best on here definately.
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Postby 4D » May 19th, '07, 00:06

That song is dope as fuck man, and for the record nobody singled you out and checked your lyrics because they were so good. It will be done to most people, but mostly to new people who we are unsure of their capabilities.

And nobody doubted, because it was a fact that the lines were from somewhere else. How's that wrongful accusations, or how are people hating on him for no reason? He was found out, and I myself believe he writes his own stuff, but made a poor judgement call to use those lines. I personally hope to see more of your stuff man, and hope you can regain your respect in the battle section, because you got people fainting in here and shit, it's like being backstage at a Motley Crue concert or somethin', ya got bitches goin crazy with yer rhymes! :D
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