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Postby Tash8 » May 18th, '07, 06:37

love it man, yea more poetic

lots of emotion and shit..
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Postby Flamez » May 18th, '07, 06:38

damn that was nice lovin' it i read it twice lol :happy:
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Postby Hadez » May 18th, '07, 06:45

real ill. i like it, propz :worship:
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Postby Tash8 » May 18th, '07, 06:52

hey, sorry if this is a stupid question but are you signed to a label.
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Postby Tash8 » May 18th, '07, 07:01

because if shitty people like MIMS and shit got a label and you don't then this society is really fucked up.
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Postby Tash8 » May 18th, '07, 07:04

oh, well someone will sign ya, just need to get your shit out there.
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Postby James R. » May 18th, '07, 17:29

Thats some nice stuff. Definitely more poetic in style. Nice change from what I normally hear. I think this is the 1st thing I've read from you and I'm impressed.
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Postby Kez » May 18th, '07, 18:56

The simplicity completely makes the piece, if you get what i mean.
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Postby ThomasAguanis » May 19th, '07, 05:26

very nice piece. was very intelligent, and got your point across very simply. different type of writing we're used to seeing here but it's still awesome. Great work man.
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Postby JMG » May 19th, '07, 05:48

good work man
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Postby Global » May 19th, '07, 05:52

I dont come in here but i thought to myself fuck it i might come in here anyways :whistle:

The first thread apart from the stickys is yours Maybe's :happy:

:shocked: I read it and it was fuckin mad

Propz for posting keep em' coming :8)
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Postby Global » May 19th, '07, 06:37

McMaybe wrote:Thanks j, and thanks man ^ appreciate the read
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Postby 4D » May 19th, '07, 09:04

WTF, why'd ya delete it man, I was hopin to read it. :(
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Postby Tash8 » May 19th, '07, 13:57

^ so no one would steal it probably.
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