[NEW][Third Time Lucky]

[Kez]

Alright i've been working on this fucker since January, so i'm not gonna not post it now because of doubts.

Information:

This tape is not a typical MCing tape as some might expect. I created this whole tape with my local area and people i knew in mind. I originally had 20 tracks, but i decided to narrow it down to 14, because some weren't as good as others.
There is only a couple of ft.'s on it, because i wanted this to be mainly me.

Tracklist:

01 - Kez - Entertain
02 - Kez ft. Big Ax-D - Murder
03 - Kez - Fuck You
04 - Kez - 110%
05 - Kez - Run Away
06 - Kez - Third Time Lucky
07 - Kez - What A Life
08 - Kez ft. ThomasAguanis - TMW Radio (Skit)
09 - Kez ft. Big Ax-D - Who I Am
10 - Kez - No Apologies
11 - Kez ft. Bar - Our Music (Skit)
12 - Kez - Wondering Why
13 - Kez - Understand
14 - Kez - You Never Learn

Next Tape?:
I don't have a title or anything for my new tape yet, but i know that it will be back to a more MC style, this tape was just something i felt i had to do, to get out the last of my messages to these pricks

Thanks To:
Bar for featuring
Big Ax-D for featuring
Abnotic Records, BuzzHawg Productions, RapitFly Beats, DJ Swift and JazEntertainment for letting me use their beats
Killa, Bar and Thomas for giving me their opinion before i posted.
Everyone who listens.

EDIT: Since Sajjad decided to bump this i decided to include the updated download links in the event more people download it.

DOWNLOAD HERE:
http://www.sendspace.com/file/axdg2g
http://rapidshare.com/files/186015495/TTL.rar

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

smH that ft was like 3 months ago or something lmao you should kicked that off

anywae i already lsitened so ill give feed later on, and we still doin that judge me track that was supposed to be on it ?

edit - oh yeh the ft was a freestyle btw

[$0 R3@L]

downloading now,ill leave feed when i get a chance bruv.

Good luck man hope it works out for ya

[Kez]

:angry: smH that ft was like 3 months ago or something lmao you should kicked that off

anywae i already lsitened so ill give feed later on, and we still doin that judge me track that was supposed to be on it ?

edit - oh yeh the ft was a freestyle btw

I don't see the point in doing the track now
Sorry Bar, i would of waited for you but waiting till Friday seemed so tedious when i spent friday and saturday finishing it off.

@Real thanks

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

:angry: smH that ft was like 3 months ago or something lmao you should kicked that off

anywae i already lsitened so ill give feed later on, and we still doin that judge me track that was supposed to be on it ?

edit - oh yeh the ft was a freestyle btw

I don't see the point in doing the track now
Sorry Bar, i would of waited for you but waiting till Friday seemed so tedious when i spent friday and saturday finishing it off.

@Real thanks

lol yeh fair enough

*scraps the 6 hour verse written*

lol j/p


we got to hit a track out soon though

[Kez]

^ Well i won't be as busy now so i probably will be able to.

[B.A.D.]

I'll download ASAP and leave you feed in aprox.... 12 hours hahaha!!!!

cheers!!! n congrars for ya tape!!!


*downloading now*

I've been waitin to hear this

[Phantom]

cool

[Kez]

Thanks Killa

[B.A.D.]

Here it goes


1.Entertain
Beat is too good.... the openin (I'm entertainin you)... sounds sick!!!, the verse 1 is great, u gots nice verse n nice mixin, perfect openin, like u said fuck an intro track... hook again, this hook is great

2.Murder (feat. Big Ax-D)
hahahah... chea!!!.... your verses r sick.... the shootin sounds great, nice to be collabin wit cha

3.Fuck You
who says the lil' intro, its too low, the beat is hot!! nice n slow, my kinda track chea!, verse one is amazin, nice work on there, the hook is koo but nothin too great, but, well nice lyrics for a hook, so propz on that, verse 2 is nice to, too deep... I'm lovin it

4.110%
not my kinda beat, quality is specialy bad on this... verse is hot, deep n sick!!!, nice thang u dropin eire.... this verse is extreme, nice lyric use, the hook starts good but didn't liked it, u made a nice track over an ok beat so this track is pretti sick

5.Run Away
nah..... I ain't feelin this track.... the intro is good, u need more quality, intro is too long, or is it the hook?..... "sometimes I'd like to close my eyes n run away".... stole the words rite from my mouth .... nice lyrics.... but keeps like the previous track.... nice thing.... oh hook.... its streange but good.... hahaha nice beat, verse 2 is not as good as the first one but its good

6.Third Time Lucky
I didn't liked this track.... verse 1 is deep, I'm lovin it... specialy when you talk about that wigger shit... really hit deep.... but I didn't like the hook, verses r too hot... lyrics iz amazin mayn

7.What A Life
slow paced thang.... but lyrics aren't as hot as the other stuff, mixin is great, but you still talk bout the same thing, pain, pain.... its my kinda track but u need sometim more.... hook sucks, sorry, but it sucks..... this track ain't that good, but still lyrics are good.... correction, lyrics are yeah!

8.TMW Radio (Skit)
that track is nice, I liked it hahah careers advice hahaha, hahaha this skit is good, thomas? chea!!! oooh whats that I'm listenin too??... a beat from Big Ax-D.... chea chea!!!.... lovin this skit... but you should have rapped over the beat.... haha, nice skit

9.Who I am (feat. Big Ax-D)
DJ SWIFT!!!, hahaha nice beat.... I love makin hooks.... I up for mo of em... jus halla at me.... amazin lyrics but you lost the flow a bit

10.No Apologies
beat is hot, u is really angry hahaha.... verses r nice, but I keep listenin to the same hate all the way... ain't feelin the hook.... no flow on it... verse 2 is hot, lyrics deep n tight, but its a nice track.... but still don't feel the hook, Verse 3 is the best, but you sound like u was goin tired on this, hot lyrics

11.Our Music (feat. Bar)
beat sucks.... lyrics r simple but flow is great... I can't hear bar, his voice is too low.... mmm... can't listen well haha...

12.Wondering Why
My fav track of the tape.... I'm loving this beat, this is what prooves you've gotten a lot better, thats a big pro point for you, verses r pure fya!!!... sick mixing on this, and the quality is great, lyrics r amazin... loved this track
*replays*

13.Understand
Beat: lyrics r great, the hook is amazin, nice lyrics on the hook, hahaha.... stop sayin that wigger shit, hahaha... u ain't a wigger haha, wtf happened at verse 2? it ends before it wuz supposed to, well thats what it sounds like, verse 3 is not good enough... you sound tired again, but this is a nice track over a nice beat

14.You Never Learn
slow paced, but u lost the flow a bit in some parts, n lost ur style.... the lyrics are great, nice rhymin u gots there, hook is great, perfect for an outro track.... really... nice verse 2, but you sound like hatin urself on some rhymes, don't do that.... great track, I liked this one a lot, verse 3, its nice... but again wit that wigger shit hahaha.... anywae nice track!!... beat is tight

OVERALL
too deep..... but I think you should include more topics in your album, can't deny its a great tape... propz on this one
10/10 cuz u r really sayin n spittin out from your heart, thats what err rapper should do, lovin this, n I gotta say thanks man for includin me in your album... I really preciate that... u know I'm always up for a collab, specialy wit cha cuz we speak bout the same top

[randomghost]

downloading now...feed later

[AspirinE]

01 - Kez - Entertain - its aight i like it, especially the lyrics, u need to smooth ur flow a bit.

02 - Kez ft. Big Ax-D - Murder - Great beat, lyrics are good, i would advice some more emotional voice acting to improve the sound. not a fan of the singing on the hook though lol.

03 - Kez - Fuck You - Its good, the lyrics are smart, once again, the acapela doesnt blend in the beat soundwise. but overall good.

04 - Kez - 110% - not my favorite songs, but i felt that the song it could be much better.

05 - Kez - Run Away - My favorite song so far, good job.

06 - Kez - Third Time Lucky - Pretty good, good script play.

07 - Kez - What A Life - Good lyrics, interesting beat, not liking the the hook though, the concepts for the hooks u have are aight, but u need to mix them right.

08 - Kez ft. ThomasAguanis - TMW Radio (Skit) - Hahahahah lol good skit.

09 - Kez ft. Big Ax-D - Who I Am - Pretty good, not liking the hook, but lyrics make up for it.

10 - Kez - No Apologies - the beat is too quite and mixing could be better and this song could be great. I like it nethertheless

11 - Kez ft. Bar - Our Music (Skit) - kez- good, bar- dont whisper.

12 - Kez - Wondering Why - good song, one of my favourite on this cd. Dont like the hook though.

13 - Kez - Understand - pretty good, work on the flow a bit, to make it more easy listning.

14 - Kez - You Never Learn - Dont like the beat,but the lyrics are decent. Good job.

overall:

Done well-
1) good lyrics.
2) Concepts are pretty decent too, although some varity in the content could be usefull
3) Big ups on actually finishing a mixtape.

to improve-
1) mixing is important, to make songs enjoyable.
2) work on ur flow a bit, mostly the intonation, u flip ur scripts well.
3) if u say "wankaz" with an english accent once again, my ears are gonna bleed.

[Kez]

^ Thanks ASP

[Xray]

OK look the thread is 2 years old I know, but in the "DISCOGRAPHY REQUEST! EVERYONE READ!" I see this and I downloaded it because I've never heard this before, so I decided to download and look for the thread that it was first posted in. Aight here goes:

01 Entertain:
Beat - Is crazy, dark and funky in a way.
Chorus - First chorus that came in had me thinking it was a verse, but its a good chorus none the less.
Verse 1 - Starts out classic, loving the flow, lyrics are dope, very personal. Delivery is crazy to, great verse.
Verse 2 - Was consistent, didn't fall off at all. Can't decide which verse is better cause there both equally dope and consistent.
Other - I like the way you faded out the track good work, good track to open up this tape.

02 Murder ft. Big Ax-d:
Beat - Crazy beat, I love the piano melody, really is murder.
Chorus - Wow Ax-d is crazy on this hook, love the idea of him talking in the background, gives that slight murder phone call touch. If this chorus was mixed better it would of been CRAZY.
Verse 1 - Damn this starts out murdering, another personal verse from you, flow and delivery was dope.
Verse 2 - Wasn't a fan of this verse, you fell off abit on this verse, but that's because you mainly focused on making it as personal as possible with all the talking parts, so I take it back I like this verse now.
Other - I love the idea of this song, and you two did the best you could, crazy.

03 Fuck You:
Beat - Oh my fucking god, the melody is crazy, but the drums were disappointing.
Intro - Good intro from Killa, it was cool.
Verse 1 - Delivery wasn't strong on this one, I felt you could of did more to the delivery. And the flow isn't that good neither, I think the drum pattern of this beat is fucking up your flow, cause its a tricky drum pattern. I like the part you get personal and shit, its cute.
Chorus - "such a little girl that you must be a bitch" haha love that line, good chorus but could of used better mixing.
Verse 2 - Same with the first verse really nothing different in a good way.
Verse 3 - You seem to flow on this verse more to the beat, but the delivery is still lacking.
Other - Didn't like this song, the melody of the beat was good but the drums were wack as fuck to be honest, if the drums were different the track could of been alot better.

Ayo I gotta jet for now, I'll feed the rest later no doubt. So far I like 2/3 of the songs.

[enjinn]

ill download this and give it a listen later...peace!