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Postby Rain Matrix » May 21st, '07, 17:45

tha memories of u, cut me LIKE RAZORS
I submit 2 yur decision, so we won't FIGHT LATER
I hate tha feeling, and all of it's MECHANICS
I can get buzzed, but I can't escape THA ANGUISH
they kept telling me, there is love 2 GAIN IF U WAIT
I believe that was tru, but now tha PAIN IS 2 GREAT
no need 2 venture on, tha world will always HAVE LIARS
it's a sad story, cuz yur still tha 1 I want 2 ADMIRE
I want only 2 show u how much I care, I say THAT TRULY
mistakes haunt me now, I guess it's BACK 2 ME
so now that I've BROKEN MY CHANCE, WORRY RESTS
thats my lie 2 u, I'm HOPING I GRANT YUR REQUEST
weakness in my body, like I might COLLAPSE
this is tha only time in my life, I fear THA FACTS
events have transpired, I saw this MANS HELLISH STYLE
I wish I hadn't, now never again will I see yur ANGELIC SMILE
I'm goin thru hell, I hear satans SINISTER LAUGH
still somethings whispering in my ear, FINISH YUR PATH
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Postby Tash8 » May 21st, '07, 22:39

they kept telling me, there is love 2 GAIN IF U WAIT
I believe that was tru, but now tha PAIN IS 2 GREAT

not bad man, ^ those are my favorite lines, because their not forced and they make all the sense.
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Postby Rain Matrix » May 22nd, '07, 19:22

This can't be it, I'd love a feedack from a girl as I'm goin thru hell right now becuz of 1 of y'all
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