Pain Into the lines

[JMG]

ill never be institutionalized for numerous trys of suicide
once ill do it an die but only when i lose my mind
cuz through the rhymes id rather put my pain into the lines
i feel new inside when they guide me though the tide of tears
thats been in my eyes for years now these blue skys are clear
my pride is hear so no more countin sheep
i can't be phased or thrown out of sync
my eyes on the prize im not about to blink im out to reach
atleast the mountin peak if not the sky and as i plot to raise
im givin it constent trys or ill watch my dream just rot an die
like homacide the dollar signs mean nothin to me
don't care about the money fame and luxcury
so forget the dimonds and chains
cuz its all about survivin the pain

[JMG]

i guess i just suck

[Ka0t1c]

most of it is great work, i like that shit a lot

[JMG]

thanks man

[JMG]

added a little more

[4D]

I dunno why you got no feedback on this man, because it's a great verse to be honest. Flow sweeps you along, with great multies, and a good important concept to it, it's a kind of concious uplifting message it has. I really enjoyed it man, sorry for the delayed feed. Glad you bumped it!

[JMG]

thanks man I hardly ever get feed but whatever ur one of the best on here so it means alot

[Tash8]

damn, i think this is my favorite verse from you.. the rhymes are all good none were forced, same with multis.. I flowed it eassily..

amazing shit man

[JMG]

thanks man I appreciate it

[JMG]

thanks

[Tash8]

Yeah it's good has some nice multies keep it up

since when do you feed this shit?

[JMG]

lol i was talkin to her on msn and asked her to check it out

[Tash8]

oh lol, and btw when i said feed this shit, i ment this section not your spit cause that was sick.

[JMG]

lol i didn't think nothin of it but thanks again