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awwww this is sooo sad =(

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awwww this is sooo sad =(

Postby EmFan4Life » Nov 4th, '05, 04:05

i DIDNT write this, i found it on sum child abuse site
whenever i read the last line it gave me chills

> > My name is Sarah
> > I am but three,
> > My eyes are swollen
> > I cannot see,
> > I must be stupid
> > I must be bad,
> > What else could have made
> > My daddy so mad?
> > I wish I were better
> > I wish I weren't ugly,
> > Then maybe my mommy
> > Would still want to hug me.
> > I can't speak at all
> > I can't do a wrong
> > Or else I'm locked up
> > All the day long.
> > When I'm awake I'm all alone
> > The house is dark
> > My folks aren't home
> > When my mommy does come
> > I'll try and be nice,
> > So maybe I'll get just
> > One whipping tonight.
> > Don't make a sound!
> > I just heard a car
> > My daddy is back
> > From Charlie's Bar.
> > I hear him curse
> > My name he calls
> > I press myself
> > Against the wall
> > I try and hide
> > From his evil eyes
> > I'm so afraid now
> > I'm starting to cry
> > He finds me weeping
> > He shouts ugly words,
> > He says its my fault
> > That he suffers at work.
> > He slaps me and hits me
> > And yells at me more,
> > I finally get free
> > And I run for the door.
> > He's already locked it
> > And I start to bawl,
> > He takes me and throws me
> > Against the hard wall.
> > I fall to the floor
> > With my bones nearly broken,
> > And my daddy continues
> > With more bad words spoken.
> > "I'm sorry!", I scream
> > But its now much too late
> > His face has been twisted
> > Into unimaginable hate
> > The hurt and the pain
> > Again and again
> > Oh please God, have mercy!
> > Oh please let it end!
> > And he finally stops
> > And heads for the door,
> > While I lay there motionless
> > Sprawled on the floor
> >
> > My name is Sarah
> > And I am but three,
> > Tonight my daddy
> > Murdered me.
Ever stop to think, and forget to start again?
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Postby Hunneh_Buns » Nov 4th, '05, 04:08

I got that in an email 3 years ago. It was pretty sad. :'(
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Postby Darjan333 » Nov 4th, '05, 10:49

It is so scary.......
Poor sarah... :'(
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Postby SNaKe » Nov 4th, '05, 21:40

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Postby ShadyRox » Nov 5th, '05, 17:47

seriously, is this serious? I don't think so. It may/ does happen in real life, but I dont think its from an actual person.
She cant see? How can she write? How is she 3 and can write perfectly? Woah, that rhymes.
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Postby AspirinE » Nov 5th, '05, 18:34

Elementary Rap!--ImageImage
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Postby ines » Nov 5th, '05, 21:50

sad story
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Postby misa » Nov 6th, '05, 03:20

ok that brought me to tears :'( there aint nothin i hate more than stupid ppl takin thier anger on children
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