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a broken verse i just made n tried to fix...

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a broken verse i just made n tried to fix...

Postby Ka0t1c » May 30th, '07, 08:15

right now Im thinkin about disappearin for awhile
i hope you'll hold it down here when Im out...
cuz things aint workin well, the way i thought they should no doubt
I wouldnt say Hollywood but something good could have helped
other than livin hell
I guess I misunderstood what it is i found
that brought me second thoughts of joining the Army
im not proud im destroying my body, im not enjoying like parties
this choice which Ive sought on my voyage towards hobbies from toys to hotties
but i bought into this,a boy, young n innocent
who put the point of his pen to be a voice for anybody
that look up to me wantin to copy my interestin
choices I go thru just to fulfill my own safari before i enter the ghost's realm
i am so very sorry
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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