These Bitches

[Tash8]

I patiently wait my hardest-to-drop
but it takes less time to harvest-my-crops
less, it takes for these pop artists-to-pop
and no, no you just can't hurt-me-enough
to make me listen to this bitch, Hillary-Duff
or to this child dry fucker, Akon
the media didn't give a fuck, and let him play on
it's not that I envy him, cause I envy-no-man
but I do get amazed by this bitch Lindsay-Lohan
not by her music but by her breast-implants
she has me cumming on my hands and rest-in-pants
and another young ho by the name of JoJo
has me going so much I can't say no-mo'
yea and fuck these corny fuckin' drama-queens
that whore Britney Spears, a fuckin' mama cream
a life without these bitches is what I'm tryna dream

I was bored, so in my car I made a celebrity diss.

[Hadez]

the "patiently waiting" thing is getting old. no offense.

but some good rhymes in there. keep it up

[Tash8]

thanks, i was trying to think of something like that but my head wasn't on or something cause i couldn't find a synonem [sp] for it.

[IceAxe]

you had some decent multis in it.... flowed pretty well to me.... ok structure....stuck to the main idea through out. You've definitely improved a lot since you first started.

Keep it up

[Tash8]

thanks and bump

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

pretty good tash
liked it.....
keep at it

[Tash8]

gracias senor chris

more por favor

[Curtis]

That was good

I liked the Lindsay Lohan part.

[Tash8]

haha it's my fav part too

thanks for feed

more please

[Tash8]

bump

[shady4life!]

that was pretty good i like all of it. good job keep it up

[Tash8]

thanks ^ man

haven't written much more of this style..meaning more complicated

for my audio i'm trying to keep it simple so hopefully it'll sound better

[Flamez]

that was good tash i liked it, keep it up

[Tash8]

that was good tash i liked it, keep it up

thanks