sorry amigos

[shady_aftermathzz]

You were with me from the beginning,
I never had to ask but you said you would be there till the end,
Truly maybe you was like me in many ways, we used to be good friends/
We from the same place where angel cries, angel falls and dies,
When times were rough, you were by my side, wiped tears frm my eyes/
You felt my words, you always appreciated what I used to write,
You been gone, been so long since I was respected, they all talk lies/
Why things changed? Not even YOU now, feel the pain of my life,
So, I disguised, tried to take you by surprise before I had to hide/
Murdered myself within me and I didn

[shady_aftermathzz]

upping, yeah i know still not working on ma structure n' flows

[Hadez]

first off, its ok to wait more then 2 n a half hours to get feed.

i dunno really know wut to say tho. the rhyme scheme was really simple. u kinda started to talk about irrelevant things. u go from somebody leavin u, then start talkin about devils n demons and some marshall mathers desease. u should practice ur rhyming to get it more complex.

[shady_aftermathzz]

aigght, waiting 2 n' half hr is good/ got that/
i actually write lots of poems n' its not been much since i started putting and sorting them into rhymes, slowly n' slowly im on it, thanks for the feed bru', really appreciated...means a lot to me n' sure ima' take'em all suggestions/ yeah, its kinda' mixed feelings....i always do that, once i start writing, lots of shits hits ma mind n' i just put'em down/ thanks for the feed again/ much respect

peace