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My Letter

Postby TRshady » Jun 19th, '07, 16:22

Start off in a four, unless theres less
a range of weapons at my disposal, there's no contest
switch from pistol to ghansher to smash ya easily
give you my undivided attention, no fees it's free
roadie run up on a son of a bitch to see what's up
two shots hes down, pop off his head when he gets up
reviving a brother before taking cover
then stealing a kill to win the match and have dude dissing my mother
making 12 year olds cry, just for the fun of it
just so I could say I did
winning any handicap match, number of kills - no limit

.... been playing Gears of War for the last 2 hours :'(

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Re: My Letter

Postby 4D » Jun 19th, '07, 16:28

Haha fuckin dope, bout time you started rhyming again. :D Not heavy on the multies or complexity. But not as simple as it looks either, it's the way you use the words, it's very vivid and descriptive, and the flows nasty man, I love your style. I remember you threw a few lines at me back in the day that weren't too shabby either. Keep it up man, don't leave it so long again.

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Re: My Letter

Postby Tash8 » Jun 19th, '07, 17:31

nice that's not simple... believe me that's a bit complex drop... it's not always about multis it;'s about how he used the words

nice shit :D, but make it more complex next time
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Re: My Letter

Postby Deadishot » Jun 20th, '07, 16:06

TR plays GOW.. i might haveto start playing again and we can ake 12 yr old cry together
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Re: My Letter

Postby TRshady » Jun 20th, '07, 16:07

I used to make the mistake of focussing on how it rhymes so just went for content this time around.
Though I've wrriten a smarter/complex verse today, here:
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Re: My Letter

Postby C-Game » Jun 20th, '07, 20:03

kool rhymin bro... :y:
i thought u were only in to PC stuff and a lot of porn...


ill read ur other drop 2mo

oh and y dont u get in to battlin...

team up with ASP and battle me and 4D and IceAxe and Bar and Killa and Maybe

the Fatal 4 way of the century

The Admins ( TR & ASP ) vs The Globals (Maybe & Killa ) vs The Mods ( C-Game & 4D ) vs The News ( Bar & IceAxe )
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Re: My Letter

Postby Tash8 » Jun 20th, '07, 20:29

vs the cool people (tash8,hadez, chris)
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Re: My Letter

Postby 4D » Jun 20th, '07, 20:43

C-Game wrote:kool rhymin bro... :y:
i thought u were only in to PC stuff and a lot of porn...


ill read ur other drop 2mo

oh and y dont u get in to battlin...

team up with ASP and battle me and 4D and IceAxe and Bar and Killa and Maybe

the Fatal 4 way of the century

The Admins ( TR & ASP ) vs The Globals (Maybe & Killa ) vs The Mods ( C-Game & 4D ) vs The News ( Bar & IceAxe )



Lmfao, nice bloody idea. Too unfair though, mods got that battle owned! :D
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