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Only One You

Postby Rae » Jun 21st, '07, 01:31

Theres only one you
Theres only one person that can make me feel the way you do
Theres only one person that i can have on my mind at all times

I cant believe i threw what we had away
I didnt realize love doesnt come everyday
My love isnt something i want to convey
Your the only one that i want to have it
It'll only be for you if your here to stay
My day seems so dark and grey without you
I love you so much
But we dont talk no more
I was dying to hear your voice
But when i finally heard it
I realized i didnt recognize it anymore
I'm just trying to open a door
For me and you
You dont realize how much i go through on a daily basis
I just want to be in your arms feeling like I'm in a oasis

Theres only one you
Theres only one person that can make me feel the way you do
Theres only one person that I can have on my mind at all times
I know theres only one you
I hope you know that too

What do I have to say to get you back
I dont know what to do without you
My heart is what I lack
I cant give it to Miguel
Because you never gave it back
I've tried to move on, because you are forgone
But thats something I couldnt do
Because I compare everyone to you

Theres only one you
I want to know that the only you is with me
Last edited by Rae on Jun 21st, '07, 17:20, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Only One You

Postby sinemm » Jun 21st, '07, 12:01

aww

thats pretty cool hun

some cute lines some deep :happy:

nice job :y:
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Re: Only One You

Postby Aft3rmath » Jun 23rd, '07, 04:05

Thats some deep shit Rea, I like it alot.

Some great lines and you stuck to the point. :worship:
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Re: Only One You

Postby Rae » Jun 23rd, '07, 04:42

thanks sinemm and aft3rmath

it means alot!

i tried lol

:D
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Re: Only One You

Postby Flamez » Jun 23rd, '07, 08:25

i like it a lot its deep and its nice , good job rae :y: :8)
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Re: Only One You

Postby SajN » Jun 23rd, '07, 12:19

Yeah .. just as the other said .. Good Job Rae :y: :y:
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Re: Only One You

Postby Rae » Jun 23rd, '07, 13:00

lol thanks ....

i wrote it for someone and it dont matter now b/c i fucked up bigtime. soo yeah ... :'(
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Re: Only One You

Postby stevethetruth » Jun 24th, '07, 02:54

good stuff rae even though someone edited the few first lines for you :shifty:
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Re: Only One You

Postby Rae » Jun 24th, '07, 03:21

stevethetruth wrote:good stuff rae even though someone edited the few first lines for you :shifty:

haha thanks hunn
i appreciate it! (cant spell)
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