poem

[shady_aftermathzz]

Another gloomy day,
Another lonely night, has passed by/
Stinking M-E-M-O-R-I-E-S in play-
Yet hoping for a better day

Fallen so hard -
C-R-A-C-K-S in my heart,
Insanity in my soul
Wells in me dry -
Tired, and
Eyes blurred -
To see my reasons to try
Desolation everywhere;
Dry land, dry heart -
Dry mind, dry life/

No thirst, no hunger;
No burning desires
In me, any longer./

So, I lay,
In my own creation:
My foolish life,
On its way towards destruction;
With everything -
I never wished for.
Orphaned and divorced
By, its reason and insight;
Wisdom and judgement,
S-C-R-E-A-M-I-N-G
To break free,
From its c-h-a-i-n-s of
Porcastinations and addictions/

My restless life,
S-C-R-E-E-C-H-I-N-G
For its lost causes -
Once it held so dearly.

salma di

peace

[sinemm]

i like it.

there are some good lines ..the thoughts most of us feel sometimes..

sounds cool..keep up.

[shady_aftermathzz]

uhhh thanks kind lady, appreciate for the feedback
means a lot to me

[sinemm]

uhhh thanks kind lady, appreciate for the feedback
means a lot to me

no problem hun
now you check mine

[shady_aftermathzz]

sure thing

[Flamez]

thats a nice poem man i like it

[shady_aftermathzz]

thanks bru'
much appreciated

[Aft3rmath]

Yo this shit was hot, I like it a lot, I am a big poem guy, I try and wright a poem before I wright a song it helps.

-Props man