Nice Person

[Imposter]

let it be known im not a nice person/
i let it be shown still laughin about steve irwin/
thier family will end up like the Reeves/
first the father next the mother and the kid left praisin Jeez/
mormans kneeled down on they knees/
fuck em all hope they die oozin and bleeds/
no no baby pleez/
cant help it im made up of sins/
purple and red velvet skirt down to my shins/
oh shit now im a cross dressin bitch/
fuck this blow my brains out...how??? i dont even exist/

my friend wrote this and told me to put it on here for him

[4D]

It's lame dissin dead people, unless it's Hitler.

Average rhyme, no real flow to it, okay punchlines, but not that funny, no multies or complexity. I give it a 3 out of ten, typical of somebody starting off. Your friend needs to keep practicing, he'll improve more if he does.