CYPHER - Puns, Metaphores & Similes (Read definitions) T

[J Roc]

my rhymes are speakin,my lines dont weaken,im like a rapper wit no weakness
ya cant beat this,my shit goes higher then pistols fire,yall love my uniqueness


"my shit goes higher then pistols fire"

^^hard to explain,my rhymes would go higher then the bullet you shot a pistol with cause they good,like i said hard to explain

[JMG]

my rhymes are designed to give u a brain rush
when i arrive in ur mind with a paint brush
and i aint up and leavin till im done acheavin
my skill turns puns to demons
so hot u think the sun is screamin
but my page makes it look like it has a cold
like the rays were my pen turnin brass to gold
so u have been told but im drinkin and cheefin blunts
so its bed time cuz i cant see much
if u aint feelin my rhymes its cuz they cant be touched

[Hadez]

"my shit goes higher then pistols fire"

^^hard to explain,my rhymes would go higher then the bullet you shot a pistol with cause they good,like i said hard to explain

its hard to explain something that didnt make sense to begin with

[4D]

my rhymes are designed to give u a brain rush
when i arrive in ur mind with a paint brush
and i aint up and leavin till im done acheavin
my skill turns puns to demons
so hot u think the sun is screamin
but my page makes it look like it has a cold
like the rays were my pen turnin brass to gold
so u have been told but im drinkin and cheefin blunts
so its bed time cuz i cant see much
if u aint feelin my rhymes its cuz they cant be touched

Nice, some dope metaphores there, that last line is familiar though, i've seen that somewhere before.

im like a rapper wit no weakness
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That's not a simile man, it doesn't have another meaning, onyl that you're a rapper with no weakness.

my shit goes higher then pistols fire

That is a metaphor, it does make some sense, but is not an obvious one. Hadez, no ned to be so negative, it's not easy to write these things. Also, please don't post in the cypher, unless you're dropping a rhyme too, thanks man.

Also, some nice meta's by Rain and Tash!


Next Rhyme:

In battles i`m like "The Bangles", emcees babble while I spit "Eternal Flames",
I`m a viciously fit olympic gymnast when it comes to linguistic verbal games

The Bangles were a group who had a hit called "Eternal Flames"
And comparing myself lyrically to a super fit gymnast in the olympics

[JMG]

my rhymes are designed to give u a brain rush
when i arrive in ur mind with a paint brush
and i aint up and leavin till im done acheavin
my skill turns puns to demons
so hot u think the sun is screamin
but my page makes it look like it has a cold
like the rays were my pen turnin brass to gold
so u have been told but im drinkin and cheefin blunts
so its bed time cuz i cant see much
if u aint feelin my rhymes its cuz they cant be touched

Nice, some dope metaphores there, that last line is familiar though, i've seen that somewhere before.

thanks man, and maybe but i didnt bite it though just did a google search and didn't find anything so idk

[IceAxe]

there's thought behind my bars like complicit therapy
I cant be topped my rhymes are law like "no illicit heresy"

-complicit -involved in illegal activity, the therapy part refers to jail, where you're sent to think about what you did.

that sucked

and @ JMG - that line does sound similar to this,

"you ain't feelin it then it must be to real to touch" - Eminem

[Tash8]

I "brush" you so fast like an "oral, b" i'll clean you out so that all will see
hes more into givin orally than sayin a hated word he's just a fuckin' parrot bird

is that any good?

[JMG]

oh yeah ive heard that but i didn't think about it when i wrote it