don't you ever feel...

[Flamez]

had to take this out of me somehow..

don't you ever feel like shit somedays like nothing goes your way
no matter what you say people are like get the fuck out my way
why am i feeling this way today what if i just left and ran away
would your rather see me decay cuz everything won't be okay
nothing will be the same its a shame i know i'm the one to blame
the devil is what i became this ain't no game its like i'm burning in flames
its an agonizing pain thats destroying me completely am i in a living hell
cuz i feel like shit and this is my last farewell

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

love it...its so deep
good work

[shady_aftermathzz]

feeling it bru'
we all feel that way sometimes...just capture those moment in between lines n' proceed, keep writing


peace

[Curtis]

it's cool. your rhyming too much especially with "ay" IMO

but it's pretty good

[Flamez]

well thank you guys glad you liked it