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I want you to know ..

Postby Rae » Jul 1st, '07, 18:50

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I drink more than you, I party harder than you do, And my car is faster than yours too! RAWWRR!

www.myspace.com/harleyquinn667 <--- add me
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Re: I want you to know ..

Postby J Roc » Jul 1st, '07, 23:16

tha thot was good,is u pregnant?
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Re: I want you to know ..

Postby Rae » Jul 2nd, '07, 00:20

J roc wrote:tha thot was good,is u pregnant?

thanks
and i think i am.
i'll find out soon.
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Re: I want you to know ..

Postby Flamez » Jul 2nd, '07, 04:03

that was good rae i liked it :happy:
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Re: I want you to know ..

Postby James R. » Jul 2nd, '07, 15:42

Deep shit. Not overly complex concepts and the rhyming was basic but the emotion made up for it. The 1st verse was my favorite of the two I think, but they were both good.
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