My Dome's prone ta genius! (8 NEW Lines, got bored again!)

[4D]

I got forum boredom, it's greaviously tedious much more than previous,
I want a lobotomy from the monotony, cos my dome's prone ta genius,
I`m known to be this flowin ceaseless older beast with golden thesis,
Rhyme hopefuls see this start postin leaflets like adorers promotin jesus,
I'm cuttin flowin seas and oceans beaches with biblical Moses breaches
My spoken speeches are flooring teachers who babble with broken English,
Hope is bleakest for the prose elitists who chose to 'pete with FORDIE's pieces
I make the dopest freakish posting Free-ist wanna slit his throat to flee this.
So grope for Kleenex, Wipe away tears suffice to say your life remains spared,
Your wife explains fears of findin brains smeared on your whitest lace wares,
It's why she stays scared, she likes the place clear of clutter and Dirt,
Her love is perversed, she thinks the mud in the earth is above what your worth,
You muffle the hurt, but my thunderin' verse makes you struggle for words
You stumble on verbs like stuttering nerds with nasty speech impediments,
I'm reaching excellence, teaching residents of this forum to seek intelligence,
My mystique 'n elegant chic malevolent raps smash like stampeding elephants.


Just got a bit bored, and started rhyming, feedback would be cool!

[James R.]

Hahahahaha multies were crazy in this man. And even though it's more or less about nothing it was still the best thing I've read since I been feedin it up today. Always good to see something from you.

[4D]

Lmao, yeah man no tpoic or theme to this one. Just showing off some rhyme skills, and blabbin about being the best!

Hey Rakim is arguably the best ever emcee, and he raps about being the best rapper. So i`m gonna write about being the best writer.

BTW, not by any means putting myself in Rakims league!

[IceAxe]

great as always

keep it up

[Tash8]

yea real nice multis man

[4D]

audio plz

I don't do audio man, i`m a lyrics guy, i`m too lazy and impatient to put in the work neccessary to record something worth posting. You probably knew this already, and I can't tell by your post whether you wanted to hear an audio version, or if it was a dissing kind of way to say, do audios if you wanna impress me.

[4D]

audio plz

I don't do audio man, i`m a lyrics guy, i`m too lazy and impatient to put in the work neccessary to record something worth posting. You probably knew this already, and I can't tell by your post whether you wanted to hear an audio version, or if it was a dissing kind of way to say, do audios if you wanna impress me.

lol uess it could come off that way

nah i just think if you tryed ya would get hooked and that can only mean good things

Ok sorry for gettin the wrong impression.
I did try it a few times, but I don't get enough piece and quiet in this house to practice or record anything, so it's more or less dead from the go. It's also nearly too embarrassing for me to listen to my own shit, and fuckin up at the last line of a verse once or tear enducing. I don't have the time and dedication to practice like you guys. If I had your situations and mindstate it might be a easier. Either way I think writing is more my talent than rapping.

I might surprise ye someday with a minute long shit quality audio or something, we'll see.

[4D]

^ Lol, i'd dobt that, prolly just for second opinion.


P.s I've just added 8 new lines to this, going with the same flow of multies. Please leave some feed.

[IceAxe]

Flowed pretty well with the first half. At first I couldn't tell where you added on. Multies and such were on par with everything else you've done.

Keep it up

[JMG]

damn good shit

[4D]

Thanks for the feedback people, I appreciate ye checking it out again!!

[4D]

Naw man, did it in silence, with just a running rhythm in my head. Rappin it to myself after every line.

[4D]

Yeah, that's the only problem with not writing to a beat, it can sometimes be hard to fit it with a tune. Also, my stuff can sometimes be very tongue-twisterly, so fuck ups are common place, that's what used to crack me up about recording, and I didn't want to make them simpler.

[C-Game]

one word... SICK

sorry couldnt give a full review coz as u know im preparin for fridays presentation..