Ha Ha, read this!!

[Aft3rmath]

I may have low posts and no experience, but id rather have advice given to me by someone who is actually good, this is to him:

You say you can call my rhymes/
touche, we all suck sometimes/
but what you dont realize/
is that im not you so back off and open them eyes/
Id rather have my balls cut off and stepped on/
spit on, cut up, and shit on/
than to hear what you have to say/
shit talker, comes back and then walks away/
next time ill send ya to da hospital the express way/
with
a bullet in ya head and rag to clean the shit off ya face/

[4D]

This is creative writing man, if you wanna battle someone I'd suggest calling them out, and not resorting to just dissing them here. I`m presuming this is to James R. who wasn't at all insulting to you in your topic, but just gave you some constructive criticism. If you don't like criticism maybe you shouldn't post a rhyme on a "discussion" forum and expect replies. Eminem gets his ass ripped on this forum for his songs, you really think you're gonna escape the magnifying glass?

It would be interesting to see James R reply though, I don't think i've seen him battle anyone yet. If you want a battle though, you should post a call out in the specially made subforum in "Rap Battles".

[James R.]

Hahaha I hope this isn't directed at me. I wasn't dissin you I just let you know the exact same thing as 4D. And check the resume kid my songs are impeccable. Find one song I posted that got negative feed. I know what I'm talkin about. Just cuz I don't have 8000 posts doesn't mean I don't know what I'm doin. But yeah that's only if this is directed at me.

[Tash8]

Hahaha I hope this isn't directed at me. I wasn't dissin you I just let you know the exact same thing as 4D. And check the resume kid my songs are impeccable. Find one song I posted that got negative feed. I know what I'm talkin about. Just cuz I don't have 8000 posts doesn't mean I don't know what I'm doin. But yeah that's only if this is directed at me.

ur a bit modest lol

but yea james will kill you LYRICALLY

[Aft3rmath]

I really dont care much any way, im going to Iraq in a month, so im just gettn some stress out before I go....and yeah it was directed towards you, because I think u need to get more to the point and be direct instead of adding all that "fluff" to make it seem like u werent tryn to say I sucked, cause thats how you get the point across. Have fun being safe in this country, while i go fight for your freedom and what allows u to be on this site, and the ability to post your words, emotions, and your skills.
-Peace

[4D]

Well, good luck over there man, it's pretty shit, so hope nothing rotten comes your way, nobody said anything condescending to you here man, it was just a misunderstanding.

[Tash8]

I really dont care much any way, im going to Iraq in a month, so im just gettn some stress out before I go....and yeah it was directed towards you, because I think u need to get more to the point and be direct instead of adding all that "fluff" to make it seem like u werent tryn to say I sucked, cause thats how you get the point across. Have fun being safe in this country, while i go fight for your freedom and what allows u to be on this site, and the ability to post your words, emotions, and your skills.
-Peace

i wish you best

but no offense to u man, but your not fighting for shit, us being in iraq is gonna result in the Vietnam war nothing's bad shits gonna happen.. .sorry for bush being an idiot.

[Aft3rmath]

In a way you are right, but I am fighting for what I got, even though its not my choice to fight, i have to, if I don't, we will all die, and no your wrong about the Vietnam thing, The troops that die over there are a result of bad enemy, ally communication, not empowerment. We don't know who we are fighting bro, they all dress the same, they have no uniforms, so we are left to suspect everyone. I still think we should just bomb Iraq and Afghanistan and fuck them all up, I don't care for them, why should we care, they don't care about us. Any way thanks for the support, I and all my men are gonna need it.

[Tash8]

In a way you are right, but I am fighting for what I got, even though its not my choice to fight, i have to, if I don't, we will all die, and no your wrong about the Vietnam thing, The troops that die over there are a result of bad enemy, ally communication, not empowerment. We don't know who we are fighting bro, they all dress the same, they have no uniforms, so we are left to suspect everyone. I still think we should just bomb Iraq and Afghanistan and fuck them all up, I don't care for them, why should we care, they don't care about us. Any way thanks for the support, I and all my men are gonna need it.

and how is that different from Vietnam's? in Vietnam we didn't know who we were fighting either, they were all the same...

[Aft3rmath]

no they had uniforms man, taliban and alqeiuda dont.

[James R.]

Fluff? It didn't suck thats the problem dipshit. But with a title like "Sick Song" there was no misinterpretation of the meaning, the song just didn't deliver. But regardless you suck in comparison to other people here if thats what you wanna hear. And yeah good luck over seas.

[Aft3rmath]

Yeah thanx, i dont need luck, im naturally good at killing things.

[James R.]

Thats a rare talent. Lets just hope none of the targets are better than you then shall we?

[4D]

Yeah thanx, i dont need luck, im naturally good at killing things.

You suck for saying that!

[Enimee]

wow i think some of yall mother fuckers need to shut the fuck up about war and shit like uhh tash u dont know two shits about what your talking about...the only people who have ANY CLUE why and what goes on are the people doing it.....wow kids theses days