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not tha best ull see from me //bullys a bitch//

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not tha best ull see from me //bullys a bitch//

Postby J Roc » Jul 3rd, '07, 12:26

aight 8:00 am an im still up,not my best cause of that but im bored :)

im fully-disfunctional,tha bully-is-punk-cha-know?just slit-his-throat,his freestyle shit-is-wrote
im lost-in-mind,he cost-my-rhyme,so now he crossed-tha-line,its a pistol-death,im doin crystal-meth
so i dont give-a-shit,i live-to-quit,he has a dishonest-crave,ill piss-on-his-grave
zip-his-mouth cuz his shits-tha-south,tear his lip-right-out we dont wanna-listen,this is alotta-dissin


kinda tired,yall can decide if its wack,if it is ill try an post sumthin better tomoro
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Postby James R. » Jul 3rd, '07, 17:31

It was too short to really judge but the multies past the 1st one about bein dysfunctional were pretty solid so props on that. Definitely can tell you were bored.
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Postby J Roc » Jul 3rd, '07, 22:53

lol,thanks for readin an feedin James :y:
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