Smtn I wrote while fightin through writer's block

by 4D » Jul 5th, '07, 03:42

First 3 lines and last 2 are great lines man, :y:

I found the middle 3 unusually below par for you. But as you said you were fighting writers block so that's only natural, we all go through it. :happy:

by **James R.** » Jul 5th, '07, 07:35

yeah I dont like anything past the 1st 3 lines but I had to put smtn down on the paper lol

by **Tash8** » Jul 5th, '07, 07:40

wasn't too bad man, i mean for your level it was ok for almost everyone else it was :y:

i think i've hit creativity block haha, can't think of anything creative but i think i'm still improving on my rhymes/lyrics just not the creativeness

by **J Roc** » Jul 5th, '07, 07:42

alota words i didnt understand,it was good tho,except lines 5&6

by **James R.** » Jul 5th, '07, 16:30

Word thanks. I'm feelin a lil better today so I might take some of that verse and incorporate it into something new and better.

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