new verse please feed

[stevethetruth]

it's funny how everybody always underestimates
discriminates the iller mc guess they love to hate
let's set the record straight I’m great it's a fact
fire in my mind state keeping me on track
I’m like nothing you ever heard so absurd
every word like damn I’m that good so pure
nobody is near the viscidity or near my ability
it must be the will in me my creativity
clever lines in my brain waiting attack
skill I don’t lack fact you brats need that
so proceed back best believe that
I’ll never quit this shit I live and breathe rap

[Requiem]

dang, that's some hot, fresh, cool, whatever you wanna call it, it's great lyrics, here, let me rip it too - Ice Killa
-yo, i'm violent, not caring for those who cry lament
try some shit, see if u get away with it
like the chronicles of riddick
i blow away the critics
and there aint no chance of endin
so let me start from the beginnin
don't step to me
this isn't a game show, but i'll put ur life in jeapordy

[stevethetruth]

haha thanks man

[Inches]

Prety good man, i havent read any of your stuff ina while./
Keep it up

[stevethetruth]

thanks a lot for the feedback man

[Requiem]

hey, ur talented, keep it up!

[stevethetruth]

thanks...........bump

[Rae]

it was good
i already read it on aim but its still good! lol

keep it up hunn.
it seems like all you keep doing it progressing.

[stevethetruth]

i know long bump but i added lines to it.. check it out if you can