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Postby Rain Matrix » Jul 5th, '07, 20:54

have I made this clear, I hate it here, many fail, we allow it, then we bail
thats my greatist fear, most of my thoughts are unheard of like an empty jail

locked away, I gotta say, I can't stop ta play, in this world, u need a lot of faith
I fought disorder, people keep crossing borders, if u want peace, it's not tha day

my flow be fate, if u only hate, it'll be a lonely wait, lets get 2 brawling boss
this rhyming artist, finding art with a climbing harness, I'm not falling off

u feel it's 2 real, holding yur new steel, cuz it's fame with a price
most will never get a shoe deal, were in debt ta life, so get ya mic

it's what u make it out ta be, tha answer, don't ever doubt ya keys
dope, I can't douse tha trees, I hope my parents are proud of me

in my lame town, I spit 4 tha same crowd, I take a puff and blow out a rain cloud
u tame clowns should probably change now, or I might have 2 send flames down

hidden on tha desktop, my next drop, I recite it and my breath stops
I'm hustling but it's troubling, why am I struggling, puzzling I guess not
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Postby 4D » Jul 5th, '07, 21:04

That's fuckin dope man, best i've seen from you!! :smoking:


I love that last line, sweet!! :y:
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Postby Tash8 » Jul 5th, '07, 21:08

4D wrote:That's fuckin dope man, best i've seen from you!! :smoking:


I love that last line, sweet!! :y:


i gotta agree, it's the best iv'e seen from you, nothing was forced, everything made sense, and it was real nice emotional :D :D

nice job man.. keep this style...
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