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16 bar verse re: government

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16 bar verse re: government

Postby Mc Cubz » Jul 5th, '07, 01:56

In the uk you claim labour or tory
Even tough we know they only take the Place for glory
Blazing more weed than rasters n made up stories
So I decied take all ladies make an orgy

Wonder why ya friggin bitches clit is itchier
(Its) cos cubz was linkin her giving her Chlamydia
Creepy crawlies eating you horny hoes to execution
Reproducing monsters as they grew through evolution

So pikachus Eeeeee-lectrocuting you
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Re: 16 bar verse re: government

Postby James R. » Jul 5th, '07, 02:24

Hahahahahahahaha that was some funny shit

You had a decent flow and a nice concept. You could probably up the vocab. The harder larden rhyme was weak, but the humor made up for it. Very fun song. I enjoyed it
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Re: 16 bar verse re: government

Postby Mc Cubz » Jul 6th, '07, 01:46

James R. wrote:Hahahahahahahaha that was some funny shit

You had a decent flow and a nice concept. You could probably up the vocab. The harder larden rhyme was weak, but the humor made up for it. Very fun song. I enjoyed it


thanks for the feed btw the bin larden line was in the sense of like:
bcos i gave the prime minister's wife disease, he then got the disease
so it hurt when he is blown (given head to) cos of the disease and the word blown is word play with blown as in a bomb blowing up and with binn larden cos he blew up the towers.
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