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can't sleep...

Postby Flamez » Jul 6th, '07, 09:01

so i wrote something short :sweating:

having sleepless nights in a cyclical insomnia till the sun shine bright
this is like a nonstop flight sitting tight while i write in broad daylight
everytime i can't sleep its like i'm color blind only seeing black n' white
too tired tonight to even put up a fight its like i'm knocked out cold
with no where to go gotta let the story unfold n' the truth be told
i'm uncontrolled out my mind that i struck gold banging from behind
parkin' my escolade into the most comfortable parkin' spot i could find
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Re: can't sleep...

Postby MuNxMuN » Jul 6th, '07, 09:19

it's only 1am :unsure:
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Re: can't sleep...

Postby AspirinE » Jul 6th, '07, 14:54

MuNxMuN wrote:it's only 1am :unsure:



lmao :laughing:
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Re: can't sleep...

Postby Flamez » Jul 6th, '07, 16:45

lol well i don't know wasn't thinking last night i was brainless so ya and i don't sleep too late :sweating:
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