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Where I'm From

Postby James R. » Jul 6th, '07, 19:20

Some shit I did at like 2am last night half asleep but I'm feelin it. Lemme know what you think

When you from where I
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Re: Where I'm From

Postby Tash8 » Jul 6th, '07, 19:36

again :o real nice shit, but not your best. but it is real real nice.. gotta get into audio man
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Re: Where I'm From

Postby James R. » Jul 6th, '07, 19:40

Naw definitely not my best, but everything I've written lately has been a battle with writer's block. I just heard that somebody I knew from back in the day got killed and i wrote that up in the early am half asleep lol. The main difference is that it's written more like an audio song so it has a lot of pauses in the flow and shit like that. Thanks for the feed.
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Re: Where I'm From

Postby 4D » Jul 6th, '07, 20:55

On the contrary man, I think it is one of your best, even though nobody likes to admit that. I really admire the way you alway write about something, that's very hard to do, to find an interesting concept and keep on topic. You do it with ease and still keep the rhyming above average with plenty of multies. You do post some big-ass rhymes, and your about the only lyricist that posts long ones, that I can read without feeling lazy or burdened. Always a pleasure reading your shit man, nice one!! :y:


P.c That last line about "John Q", sweet man, I got it, don't know if many others will.
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Re: Where I'm From

Postby Tash8 » Jul 6th, '07, 21:02

4D wrote:On the contrary man, I think it is one of your best, even though nobody likes to admit that. I really admire the way you alway write about something, that's very hard to do, to find an interesting concept and keep on topic. You do it with ease and still keep the rhyming above average with plenty of multies. You do post some big-ass rhymes, and your about the only lyricist that posts long ones, that I can read without feeling lazy or burdened. Always a pleasure reading your shit man, nice one!! :y:


P.c That last line about "John Q", sweet man, I got it, don't know if many others will.


the thing is, if i post long ones, no one will feed them...
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Re: Where I'm From

Postby James R. » Jul 6th, '07, 21:28

@ 4D- Thanks man I really appreciate that. Like I said, I posted it cuz I was feelin it, but I didn't think it'd be one of my best songs lol. And about stayin on topic... put it like this. I listen to a LOT of rap and nothing annoys me more than when people go from talking about how many people got robbed in their hood for no reason to talking about how many times they've flown to Africa in the past month. And yeah thats one of my favorite lines I've ever done I think. Glad you caught that lol

@ Tash- You can't even let that stop you. My past 3 drops have gotten feed from you, 4D, and maybe one other person, but as long as people know what they're talkin about it doesn't matter if you get 3 people or 30 to give feed, just value that and do what you do.
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Re: Where I'm From

Postby IceAxe » Jul 6th, '07, 22:52

ya got some strong rhymes/multis in it like usual. I think this is some of the better I've read from
you...I ain't got anything negative to say bout this

good work, keep it up :y:

And try to get some audio done... your shit would make for some good songs
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Re: Where I'm From

Postby joelle » Jul 7th, '07, 02:56

you rock jam
Yes, we can.
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Re: Where I'm From

Postby James R. » Jul 7th, '07, 02:59

Thanks for all the feed people.
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Re: Where I'm From

Postby James R. » Jul 7th, '07, 16:22

Uppin feed from someone aside from Tash & 4D for once
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Re: Where I'm From

Postby James R. » Jul 11th, '07, 19:47

I know the site being down and all wasn't very conducive to leaving feed, but I'm noticing a lot of people getting feed and not giving feed. Share the love both ways people. Uppin
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Re: Where I'm From

Postby J Roc » Jul 11th, '07, 19:49

i wud but it aint there :unsure:
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Re: Where I'm From

Postby Flamez » Jul 11th, '07, 19:50

i don't see anything only says this

When you from where I :confusion:
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