quick little keystyle me and maybe did over msn

[stevethetruth]

Im not a criminal....im a buisness man says:
Im an atheist, il break your frame in states of zainious,

Im not a criminal....im a buisness man says:
meraculous metaphors, of phased and crazed and haziest,
of skies, beetles and worms travel on dragon flies,
as i burn and grip the torch that broke in christ with hatred eyes

Steve says:
i never state no lies like i said this is fate and death will comply
feel the pain inside on your side it's me digging in your chest
with these zany schemes i perfect strangle ya neck
bitch your hexed so perplexed i just killed ya, who's next

Im not a criminal....im a buisness man says:
Fuck church and breaking bread, id rather take and break your leg,
im armed and deadly, like a spider that bit a raptor and rex,
im a phyco, the docter to lipo suction your guts out, i laugh,
as i watch you scream and shout, build a mechanical function to draft, you off your ass

Steve says:
and straight to the morticion you'll never last
and you'll be caught wishing the pain was fast
but instead it's slow and unbearable driving you hysterical
jeeze it's miricle oyu still alive eye wide you bout to die?

Im not a criminal....im a buisness man says:
Im masterfull, a natural disaster to your raps and full,
of tracks and drives of songs erased, im dasterdly, an asshole,
your a maniac, tryin to rap against the brainiac,
im educated and medicated on musical tact, math..

Steve says:
fuck math i always sucked at that subject
they think i'm dumb saying which nut to scrub next

[C-Game]

yo good stuff maybe and steve,,,
next time u guys are doin it ...
wait ill rephrase it .. next time ur guys are keyin on MSN let me know............

[stevethetruth]

thanks for the feedback, oh and i edited most out because i thought that was why i wasn't getting feed


anyway thanks

[Global]

next time u guys are doin it ...

[Rain Matrix]

tha flow wasn't completly consistant but that was probably due 2 tha cypher format, there were some sick rhymes, but there were choppy lines at times, but it's 2 be expected sometimes when keystyling, I don't know what else 2 say but this is starting 2 really suck

[Flamez]

some good stuff there by both of ya