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randem RHYMEZ

Postby J Roc » Jul 11th, '07, 19:46

its to LATE~TO~RHYME,my STATE~OF~MIND is GREAT~AT~TIMES,my FATE~IS~MINE
NOT~OTHERS,i GOT~BROTHERS that SHOT~EACH~OTHER,an with no APPUNCTUATION
WE~SUNK~YUR~NATION,ill PUNCH~YUR~FACE~IN,wen yur SON~FIGHTS~ME its UNLIKELY
to SURVIVE~A~MINIT,he'll need to REVIVE~TO~WIN~IT,ya kno i GOT~STOLEN~GUNS
i SHOT~HOLE~IN~ONES,golf now~POLANS~DONE,im RACY,just try to FACE~ME
im NOT~STOPPIN,my TOPS~FLOPPIN,yes,my PROPS~GOTTEN,ill never be FORGOTTEN
like pac but YUR~NOT~HIM,DONT~SWEAT,i WONT~BET YA~LIFE,ill take THA~KNIFE
an STAB~YUR~FACE,so GRAB~YUR~MACE an DEFEND~YURSELF,dont PRETEND~MORE~DOUBTS [that u have]

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Re: randem RHYMEZ

Postby Flamez » Jul 11th, '07, 19:52

it had some nice rhymes man..

if i give feed i want feed back :sweating:
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