let me design divine lines interwined with the packed heat:
Rhymes: 7
Flow: 9
Other: I like this line, except maybe i wouldn't say "let me design" cause who ever reads this might take it a diff way
i got i'll shine
umm i didn't get that part
writin' meaninless rhymez with a sick twisted crazy mind that's mine
Rhymes: 6
Flow: 8
Other: I didn't like this line not because of it's rhymes and stuff but it's meaning, ur first line made me think that you were gonna spit some real shit but the next line u said u write meaningless rhymes?
i'm a fine good lookin' ass bitch without those mouthwaterin' big tits
Rhymes: 5
Flow 9:
Other: this line might have been good with your first line if you had said I'm packed with heat.. but this line didn't fit in at all...
Overall: you started out nice with the first part of ur first line but after that you completely change subjects or something...
keep it up, i hope this helps, dont take it as hate but take it as constructive criticism
and the rest i know didn't really fit but was just rhyming man but i dont' take this as hate lol its cool with the criticism.. and thanx 
