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Nothin New

Postby Rain Matrix » Jul 14th, '07, 03:34

I'm losing my mind using my rhymes
and abusing my grind
I only claim mine
thats why it's rain time
it used 2 be 30 tops
now it's a dirty job
I do it 4 my close kin, let it be spoken
like tha open 2 tha closing exposing
a man who used 2 feel broken
I won't be tempted
remember I'm demented and relentless
I've been that way 4 2 long
think not u wrong
I've yet 2 change like tha colors in a new bong
it has become my chosen course
2 destroy tha opposing force
my basic right, as I am matrix like
it's all in what u make this life
tha same things I hold close
I tell it like an old ghost
1 thats not sorry either
hustlin I'm hardly weaker
I'm in tha cut, trying 2 carve these words
time passed only echo's years
there's people still crying ghetto tears
there's so many snakes I must be metal gear
level clear, so I guess I can let go here
I'll tell tha hate 2 elevate, hear this short laughter
foes try 2 drop solid but I distort matters
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Re: Nothin New

Postby chad08 » Jul 14th, '07, 03:41

i dont see why u dudes put your music on here because dont u think people will steal it? owell whatever sounds good coming from my mouth ahaha jking its good, good stuff
two black gun i dont know, maybe there magnums, i dont know what the fuck there called i just grab them
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Re: Nothin New

Postby J Roc » Jul 14th, '07, 14:47

@chad--if they do then they aint gettin better,an theyll get caut eventually so it dont really matter if peple posts they writing here

@Rain--likin ya multis,only thing id work on be tha structure
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Re: Nothin New

Postby 4D » Jul 14th, '07, 15:39

Dope!

You're improving so much man, it's a treat to read your rhymes these days. I liked the shit about Metal Gear Solid, that was creative, nice one.
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Re: Nothin New

Postby Rain Matrix » Jul 14th, '07, 19:20

thanx, I was 2 some music and just wrote these lyrics, so sharing them was tha next best thing 2 recording which I am working on, anyway I'll try 2 feed tha otha guy's and gals posts more
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Re: Nothin New

Postby Flamez » Jul 15th, '07, 04:21

that was some nice shit rain :y:
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Re: Nothin New

Postby Tash8 » Jul 15th, '07, 06:29

dude stop using 2 for two and 4 for four, it's soo annoying to read...

but other than that proly your best shit so far man keep it up
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