The shits tight, but, in my opinion, with the torso being big and bulky (which suits the pic) the heads quite small by comparisson, think it would look awesum if the head was larger and the proportion slightly exaggerated, then it would loook class.
Yeah it does a bit. I used the 8-heads formula for proportion to make the figure, i just exagerated the shoulders for a "superhero" typa look, Sorta like he had in the "all caps" video, hence the color scheme too.

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Apologies if this was intetional and ive completely mis-read the pic, but its fucking amazing, the style of drawing - quality
No need for a apologies i appreciate constructive opinion. Im glad u like it. Took me like 2 days to make it

Edit: @ bar.
that overlapping line is kind of intentional, added it as a little mindfuck.