The Reason Is

[Tash8]

the groupies start blowin' my dick like I just turned on some fans
and as i spilled rhymes thru the air, it gets colder and compacts
n it started inflicting more pain in one game than the earthquakes
deflecting shots like an octupus with arms as long as earth snakes
and since my birthday i've escaped dying so many times, i made death retire
and i laid eggs in fire cuz my goal is to multiply myself so I find one to admire
honestly I ain't getting smarter but to the least i have sharpened my figure
i started poking at these beefs as a sign of relief that i am cockin' my trigger
"I'm" walking disfigured like Willie King, cuz some idiots didn't read the right thin'gs
rap meant rythm and poetry, but now "hip hop" is full of these misprints
a feeling now troubles me, I'm the only one left like i'm a fucking lost kid
turn into into the devil with rhymes turning orange cause i'm the hot shit

Willie King, got his wrong foot amputated cause doctors read something wrong

probably my most complex shit i've ever written, if you don't notice the wordplay and stuff then don't bother feeding please.

[Tash8]

just fixed something

[CaptivatingVokalz]

*PRISTINE* your wordplay was on point!! love when people write like that... the most important thing to writing anything- whether it be a song, poem, essay, etc... is always the opening sentence...and you nailed it! keeps you interested to go on and read more to see the way it ends. sharp writing skills tash i could definitely see you composing

[CaptivatingVokalz]

oh and the by the way... this was brainy - WOW "and since my birthday i've escaped dying so many times, i made death retire and i laid eggs in fire cuz my goal is to multiply myself so I find one to admire"

[Tash8]

*PRISTINE* your wordplay was on point!! love when people write like that... the most important thing to writing anything- whether it be a song, poem, essay, etc... is always the opening sentence...and you nailed it! keeps you interested to go on and read more to see the way it ends. sharp writing skills tash i could definitely see you composing

thanks glad you noticed that stuff, others probably wont haha..

thanks again

[Tash8]

oh and the by the way... this was brainy - WOW "and since my birthday i've escaped dying so many times, i made death retire and i laid eggs in fire cuz my goal is to multiply myself so I find one to admire"

haha

[James R.]

Hahaha nice shit man. Wordplay was very nice I gotta say. The flow was tighter than normal as well. This is one of my favorite pieces from you.

[Tash8]

Hahaha nice shit man. Wordplay was very nice I gotta say. The flow was tighter than normal as well. This is one of my favorite pieces from you.

thanks for the feed man, means a lot

funny thing is i get complete opposite feeds from here and another site

[Flamez]

that was a nice one man..i enjoyed reading this one

[James R.]

Tash- It's because a lot of sites have completely different styles which are usually set by the vets. So if you don't have a similar style to them they judge you to be whack or a novice or w/e. I went on one site and posted my shit and was pretty much told that I was the worst on the site, but it was because I use a lot of multies that sound good when you say them, not necessarily when you see them in text. I think people on this site have a pretty open mind when it comes to people's styles and shit like that.

[Tash8]

yea ur right that makes sense, cause some sites say, real nice and some sites are like wow go find a diff hobby